Question

Some lyrics:

Yeah, there was this one time
When u left me without a goodbye
Without any contact

Now Im wondering if u're ok
If u're fine or have a new girl
But nah, nah, u staying close yet far away

You bruised me from the inside out
All that stuff u said bout me?
Well its all true

I dont even wanna see u
I see u as a rat who cant be trusted
A creature that lurks

This may be morbid but they're just my feelings
Dont like being told you're not perfect?
Grow up, put ur chin up if ur so arrogant

That new man in town is better
With his face so calm
So unlike you thats what makes it better

Answer 1

This is actually, quite elegant in a versatile and abstract way. It's nice and simple. Though it may not seem like enough to others, in length, personally I think that it is just the right amount of words, to carry out the entirety of the idea. to which you are trying to percieve. this is very amusing and delightful.

Answer 2

damnnnnnnnnn good job daughter

Answer 3

Lovely job! I love it so much, keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

Answer 4

I think you should publish that I think it will get good reviews:))

Answer 5

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO4ednZyiOI

Answer 6

hello

Answer 7

watch the video pls

Answer 8

Umm iDK

Answer 9

pls watch

Answer 10

what

Answer 11

bad karma88

Answer 12

You can go around your neighborhood and say this is my poem would you mind sharing it with friends or something

Answer 13

no

Answer 14

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO4ednZyiOI

Answer 15

watch pls

Answer 16

No problem

Answer 17

ca

Answer 18

you wrote that banger sounds like you need to be in the music industry

Answer 19

Hmu in dms if u want me to write a song for u