Question

(Full Ver)

Roses are red
Violets are blue

I should be dead in a ditch
because of you

Such a shame i'm in this state of mind
But,you do not care,you would rather see me die

So,is this what you wish for?
Ending myself and leaving towards the light?

Whenever you look upon me
Always with a frown

I did this because of you now
You did this.It's all your fault.

(By the way,it's not supposed to rhyme)

Feedback?

Answer 1

Let me know if I should write more poems

Answer 2

Sure! Its great.

Answer 3

Yes! 😂

Answer 4

I like it, it's really good and relatable in a way. keep up the amazing work!! I would love to read more of your poem<33

Answer 5

Thank you guys ^^ I have been beginning to grow a love for dark poetry or poetry in general.

Answer 6

Same!

Answer 7

Cool, Picasso, I like it !

Answer 8

Thanks