Question

So I pretty much got bored and wrote a freestyle poem because I absolutely can, plus I'm built like that 😤😎. Here it is:

"Devoted"

I have a hard time imagining good things,
But I can now.
I used to think of myself as a lonely person,
But now I don't.
I think of what I was and what I've become,
And I see a different person every day.
I seem to focus on you too much.
It could be bad, it could be good.
But I can't help but think about you,
I love the way you make me laugh.
Whenever you talk I can't help
But put a smile on my face.
To me you're the sunlight in my life,
I wouldn't ever want that to fade away.
People say I'm obsessed.
But yes, I do love you.

Answer 1

its good i didnt read anything of it tho

Answer 2

wow amazing

Answer 3

i did

Answer 4

;-;

Answer 5

Thanks lmao

Answer 6

good

Answer 7

This is good :)

Answer 8

ikr

Answer 9

I will say I do take criticism. c:

Answer 10

honestly i need text to speech i am not reading all of this

Answer 11

ouu i love it o:

Answer 12

It's good i love it

Answer 13

salior i love this

Answer 14

yas i love you babes<3

Answer 15

Trash 😖

Answer 16

love it

Answer 17

Good job! You're better at this than me,keep it up! ^^

Answer 18

I think you should publish that on the internet or share it with neighbors

Answer 19

Thanks-

Answer 20

thats good grat job

Answer 21

GRAT??

Answer 22

Thanks lol

Answer 23

Sick poem sailor.
lemme know when u become famous fo it <333

Answer 24

im too lazy to read the poem but im sure you did wonderful on it as you always do. You are a wonderful person who does wonderful things

Answer 25

this is good

Answer 26

its great sail! :D

Answer 27

this is awesome i can understand how you feel and i know this weird cause i have no idea who u r or u dont know me but u understand.

Answer 28

Freestyle poems are decent, no spelling/grammar errors found. Great poem!

Answer 29

good job