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Lura:

Oh,grand moonlight How you banish my fright The more at look at you The more I descend into the beauty of you Beauty of this sort is not found everyday How you vanish my fears away Should I float away,just to touch you,grand moon? Or shall I stay and admire you from below My gratitude and amazement will surely show Oh,grand moon,how I love you so Feedback?

Fortish:

Thats great!! keep it up!

Sharkattack123:

Awesome job

Jake15:

great and faboulas job

Jake15:

keep it up

Fortish:

The only thing i don't understand is the 3rd line

NotYourGurlKayla:

@fortish wrote:
The only thing i don't understand is the 3rd line
In the third line I believe the mistake was they meant to say "The more I look at you"

Jake15:

try searching it up on google maybe?

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