Question

Worth It

Some nights,I feel like I should die
But at the same time,I dont want to speak the lies of life

You're not in this alone
We all know you're there

So,when you're feeling down
Think of a reason,let the depression be squished like a bug
And stay alive,you should know why

Feedback and does it make sense?

Answer 1

This is actually really decent I would say a solid 8.3/10

Answer 2

:0 best rating ive ever had

Answer 3

i give it a 10/10

Answer 4

This is awesome and Perfecto 100/100

Answer 5

It has the tone but it lacks meaning I mean it's there but it isn't expressed in a way where people can lock in and feel it come to life around them

Answer 6

100/100

Answer 7

I understand that,im still trying to work on meanings

Answer 8

This is awesome perfecto

Answer 9

Poetry tells a story and it's not a bad story but it can use more detail and expression

Answer 10

ohhhhh ok

Answer 11

Yeah

Answer 12

I used to be the poetry club president so feedback is essential for a good poem

Answer 13

Oki