So me and my friend @hunter3506 made a poem together i hope you guys like it

Question

BabyGurlXOXXO · Answer

Will you end my pain
Or will you make it rain
Will you break my heart
Or will you let me gain
Will you love me 
Or would you leave me 
What will you do?
Will you try to break me
Or will you make me?
Will you be mine?
Or will you start lyin?
Will i be crying?
Wishing i was diying?
Or will u complete me?
And promise to never to beat me?

BabyGurlXOXXO · Answer

@babygurlxoxxo wrote:

Will you end my pain Or will you make it rain Will you break my heart Or will you let me gain Will you love me Or would you leave me What will you do? Will you try to break me Or will you make me? Will you be mine? Or will you start lyin? Will i be crying? Wishing i was diying? Or will u complete me? And promise to never to beat me?

hunter3506 helped me

fl0ridagirl7 · Answer

love it

BabyGurlXOXXO · Answer

@fl0ridagirl7 wrote:

love it

thank you

hunter3506 · Answer

lol

xXAikoXx · Answer

Make sure you correct the spelling/grammar errors, to create a well-developed poem that will catch the reader's attention. Very good!

BabyGurlXOXXO · Answer

@xxaikoxx wrote:

Make sure you correct the spelling/grammar errors, to create a well-developed poem that will catch the reader's attention. Very good!

Thanks and will do