A poem i wrote

"Your whispers"

One the other side of the phone
Tears falling down my face, I hear a little whisper,
“Everything is gonna be okay,
” My body’s shaking, my hands are numb, I whisper back,
“Are you okay my love,’’
No answer back, it all goes still,
Someone tells me that,
“Shush now my darling, let the tears flow
, Because tomorrow will be a beautiful as a rainbow,”
The days go bye like you were still here
I will forever remember that I loved you dear
The pain is fading, an I’m getting stronger I
hear a little whisper that sounds like u
“I’m still here my darling don’t fret now,
Someone is waiting just to hold you.”
I smile and cry I know your in heaven but also by my side

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A poem i wrote

"Your whispers"

One the other side of the phone
 Tears falling down my face, I hear a little whisper, 
“Everything is gonna be okay,
” My body’s shaking, my hands are numb, I whisper back,
 “Are you okay my love,’’
 No answer back, it all goes still, 
Someone tells me that, 
“Shush now my darling, let the tears flow
, Because tomorrow will be a beautiful as a rainbow,”
 The days go bye like you were still here
 I will forever remember that I loved you dear
 The pain is fading, an I’m getting stronger I
 hear a little whisper that sounds like u
 “I’m still here my darling don’t fret now,
 Someone is waiting just to hold you.” 
I smile and cry I know your in heaven but also by my side

RIBLE11 · Answer

This is great!

LilyAnime · Answer

I love poems and this one is magnificent

nettym · Answer

everything about this poem is amazing, i love how relatable you made this, keep up the good work !.

badboy1557 · Answer

Damn holly you're doing amazing, nice to see you again btw

cutebunny123 · Answer

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, this poem is so cute. You did an amazing job. Sorry to hear you're going thru that. Keep up the awesome job. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.