Hey guys this is a poem i recently wrote after my recent heartbreak3 Please tell me what you think of it honestly! My hearts been broken into two, One for me and one for you, But mine’s too broken to be used. Little did i know i had been abused, Cheated, and lied upon, And you had won, Because now i was black and blue, With words you promised were true. Little did I know the “I love you’s,” Were just fake to cover up the “I hate you’s.”
it so sad yet to cool!!
love it <3
I can totally relate! Sorry that you had to go through that. But that is a really good poem. Keep up the good work!
i love itttt great job
ah its so good i hope ur doing alright tho
It's deep and emotional I like it. If you ever need to talk to anyone my dms is open, bottling up feelings isn't the best thing to do when you feel this way. I did that and I ended up hurting myself. Hope you feel better.
It sounds good i rlly love it
I really like this poem. It's sad but has a reality to love that I feel I can relate to. Great job on this!
i love this poem it brings out the feelings and i hope u feel better soon great job on this<3
i give it a 8
Amazing job! Keep up the great work. I really like it. It's really cool like Fortish said.
great job on the poem i love ur poem
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