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Can anyone give some feedback on my paper? Formatting, word choice, organization in general... any constructive criticism would be much appreciated!

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/190WcRovItwKMZUWnfuMck0vknEmmmpXfH7Q_uPVdZQQ/edit?usp=sharing

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I've suggested some things for you to reconsider.

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This is actually really good, Sorry im not a writer so idk how to help you to improve but I really did enjoy reading this.

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wondering if my citation in the second to last paragraph is correct, as I did not provide a line directly citing the book - I just included vocabulary words and a few embedded quotes with an in-text citation, as well as noted it on my Works Cited page. would this be considered correct in MLA 8 formatting?



any other general feedback about my citations/formatting would be appreciated!

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@vocaloid could you pls help or point me in the direction of someone who can?

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@tetsxpreme

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@aboveusonlysky52

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and idk how else to level up so yeah dont deport me

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