So my friend @semilore had made ths poem, Tell us how yall like it!!

One day at a Pet shop,
I met a man selling dogs,
For money he wanted to swap,
But I really wanted some hedgehogs.

"Got any hedgehogs?" asked I.
"For that's how I'll spend my money."
"No hedgehogs here!" said the guy.
He seemed to find it quite funny.

"We've got some lovely cats,
I'll give you a very fine price."
"I'd rather have some mattes."
The man blinked rapidly thrice.

The man seemed exceptionally rare,
And his manner was strangely amused.
He wasn't what I would call aware,
Great disdain he noticeably oozed.

Like others, he thought I was odd,
Some say I'm a bit tall.
Still he gave me a courteous nod,
As if he thought I was plenty cool.

So in search of my goal I departed,
But before the Pet shop could I leave,
The man came running full-hearted,
"I can help you I believe."

"Dogs, hedgehogs, you shall find.
Cats, mattes, you can get.
You must now open your mind,
And get down to west St Market.

So to west St Market I decided to go,
In search of the hedgehogs I craved.
The winds it did eerily blow.
But I felt that the day could be saved.

There were stalls selling toys,
Balls in many shades.
There were even stalls selling boies
People were scattered from many trades

I was greeted by a peculiar lady,
She seemed to be rather tall
I couldn't help thinking she might be quite shady.
I wondered if she was at all cool.

Before I could open my mouth,
She shouted, "For you, I have some hedgehogs!"
I headed towards her, to the south,
Past some cats and dogs.

"But how did you know?" I asked,
"Do you want them or not?" she did say.
Silently, the hedgehogs she passed.
Then vanished before I could pay.

As I walked away I hard a crackle
Or was it, perhaps, a hushed cackle?

Question

So my friend @semilore had made ths poem, Tell us how yall like it!!

One day at a Pet shop,
I met a man selling dogs,
For money he wanted to swap,
But I really wanted some hedgehogs.

"Got any hedgehogs?" asked I.
"For that's how I'll spend my money."
"No hedgehogs here!" said the guy.
He seemed to find it quite funny.

"We've got some lovely cats,
I'll give you a very fine price."
"I'd rather have some mattes."
The man blinked rapidly thrice.

The man seemed exceptionally rare,
And his manner was strangely amused.
He wasn't what I would call aware,
Great disdain he noticeably oozed.

Like others, he thought I was odd,
Some say I'm a bit tall.
Still he gave me a courteous nod,
As if he thought I was plenty cool.

So in search of my goal I departed,
But before the Pet shop could I leave,
The man came running full-hearted,
"I can help you I believe."

"Dogs, hedgehogs, you shall find.
Cats, mattes, you can get.
You must now open your mind,
And get down to west St Market.

So to west St Market I decided to go,
In search of the hedgehogs I craved.
The winds it did eerily blow.
But I felt that the day could be saved.

There were stalls selling toys,
Balls in many shades.
There were even stalls selling boies
People were scattered from many trades

I was greeted by a peculiar lady,
She seemed to be rather tall
I couldn't help thinking she might be quite shady.
I wondered if she was at all cool.

Before I could open my mouth,
She shouted, "For you, I have some hedgehogs!"
I headed towards her, to the south,
Past some cats and dogs.

"But how did you know?" I asked,
"Do you want them or not?" she did say.
Silently, the hedgehogs she passed.
Then vanished before I could pay.

As I walked away I hard a crackle
Or was it, perhaps, a hushed cackle?

Maggie07098 · Answer

wow just wow

semilore · Answer

@maggie07098 wrote:

wow just wow

thanks lol

cbfitz46578 · Answer

this is quite extraordinary. as someone who writes and cherishes the art of detail and perception, I so very dearly value your masterpiece. also, I hope that you have a truly magnificent day.

semilore · Answer

@cbfitz46578 wrote:

this is quite extraordinary. as someone who writes and cherishes the art of detail and perception, I so very dearly value your masterpiece. also, I hope that you have a truly magnificent day.

Thank you so much and I hope you have a great day too!!

domian · Answer

This poem is good. I wish that I could write a poem like this.

semilore · Answer

@domian wrote:

This poem is good. I wish that I could write a poem like this.

Thanks ^^

cutebunny123 · Answer

Great Job Semi and Kayla! I love it, I want to read more stuff from you two. I think you guys did an awesome job. I bet this took you guys so long to create. Thank you so much for creating this for us. <3

1008426 · Answer

hahaha that was a great poem good job

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@cutebunny123 wrote:

Great Job Semi and Kayla! I love it, I want to read more stuff from you two. I think you guys did an awesome job. I bet this took you guys so long to create. Thank you so much for creating this for us. <3

Thanks<33 It took a week i think i dont remember lol

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@1008426 wrote:

hahaha that was a great poem good job

She said ty :)

1008426 · Answer

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

@1008426 wrote:

hahaha that was a great poem good job

She said ty :)

you're welcome <3

semilore · Answer

@cutebunny123 wrote:

Great Job Semi and Kayla! I love it, I want to read more stuff from you two. I think you guys did an awesome job. I bet this took you guys so long to create. Thank you so much for creating this for us. <3

Thank you i took a week to write them lol.

cutebunny123 · Answer

@semilore wrote:

@cutebunny123 wrote:

Great Job Semi and Kayla! I love it, I want to read more stuff from you two. I think you guys did an awesome job. I bet this took you guys so long to create. Thank you so much for creating this for us. <3

Thank you i took a week to write them lol.

You're welcome!

Ava1 · Answer

good job!

semilore · Answer

@ava1 wrote:

good job!

THanks <3