Hi guys i made this poem i took me forever to think of it and write them lol.
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy
It was just so caring and athletic
But i could never forget the die

That morning, i was shocked by the ally
i found myself feeling rather synthetic
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy

Later, I realized that the Guy was shy
I thought the situation had become rather energetic
But I could never forget the die

my friend tried to distract me with a fly
Said my mind had become too pathetic
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy

I took action like a tie
The Guy was becoming too genetic
But I could never forget the die

Polly nosedived like a quiet eye
Her mind became dangerously emetic
Polly couldn't stop thinking about the Guy
But she could never forget the die

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Hi guys i made this poem i took me forever to think of it and write them lol.
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy
It was just so caring and athletic
But i could never forget the die

That morning, i was shocked by the ally
i found myself feeling rather synthetic
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy

Later, I realized that the Guy was shy
I thought the situation had become rather energetic
But I could never forget the die

my friend tried to distract me with a fly
Said my mind had become too pathetic
I couldn't stop thinking about the Guy

I took action like a tie
The Guy was becoming too genetic
But I could never forget the die

Polly nosedived like a quiet eye
Her mind became dangerously emetic
Polly couldn't stop thinking about the Guy
But she could never forget the die

Lura · Answer

What does "forget the die" mean?

nicholsonkj763 · Answer

I like it

semilore · Answer

i meant forget to die lol

semilore · Answer

@nicholsonkj763 wrote:

I like it

thanks

Lura · Answer

good poem :)

semilore · Answer

@lura wrote:

good poem :)

Thank you ^^

Lura · Answer

yw :3

Aboveusonlysky52 · Answer

i like it its good

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

Ooh girl this is a very good poem!! Good job i love it! You should write more!!

semilore · Answer

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

Ooh girl this is a very good poem!! Good job i love it! You should write more!!

Thank you andd i'll <33

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

This is great!

Chop · Answer

it's bigger than black and white

it's the whole way of life

it can't change overnight

be we gotta start somewhere

might as well go ahead and start here

we have done had one hell of a year

ima make it count while i'm here

because god is the only man i fear

semilore · Answer

@chop wrote:

it's bigger than black and white Nicee it's the whole way of life it can't change overnight be we gotta start somewhere might as well go ahead and start here we have done had one hell of a year ima make it count while i'm here because god is the only man i fear

semilore · Answer

@questioncovebot wrote:

This is great!

Thanks ^^

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@semilore wrote:

@questioncovebot wrote:

This is great!

Thanks ^^

Your welcome

ur1dad7 · Answer

you should make a career out of this your a really good poet

semilore · Answer

@ur1dad7 wrote:

you should make a career out of this your a really good poet

Thank you so much ^^

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

it's really good, but i can't seem to understand the last stanza ''but she could never forget the die" it's kind of random, and i don't really know what the poem is trying to tell me. really nice job with the vocabulary though, you seem to be very sophisticated :)

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

it's really good, but i can't seem to understand the last stanza ''but she could never forget the die" it's kind of random, and i don't really know what the poem is trying to tell me. really nice job with the vocabulary though, you seem to be very sophisticated :)

So if u scroll up in the comments saying she meant to say "forget to die"! But yeah, I agree with what you had said.

semilore · Answer

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

it's really good, but i can't seem to understand the last stanza ''but she could never forget the die" it's kind of random, and i don't really know what the poem is trying to tell me. really nice job with the vocabulary though, you seem to be very sophisticated :)

Yea about that i meant forget to die and the poem is about a girl falling in love with a guy so she wrote a poem about how she feels about him and about his personality and everything and Thank you so much ^^ <3

oopdontknowher · Answer

omg semiii it is soooo good!

semilore · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

omg semiii it is soooo good!

thank you <33