Jus a lil something I wrote the other day.
"I'm from show me state
It's harder to be fake
Taken when I was eight
Locked in cage and a gate

Say what you wanna say
But now we on the same page
Horrible life but it's still not too late
Could do something great to really change my fate
Have better nights and better days and really be okay

Alotta pills I gotta take
It's kinda hard to stay awake
Some thoughts in my brain
Theres a lot of freaking pain

The drugs mask the rain but it still won't go away
The pain jus wanna stay, my heart is blood stained
Alotta nights I prayed
He didn't answer so I felt betrayed
Burning hot like micheals blade
They say it's all jus a phase
Alotta anger, alotta pain, take it out in rage
Did alotta good but never got the praise
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Jus a lil something I wrote the other day. 
"I'm from show me state
It's harder to be fake
Taken when I was eight 
Locked in cage and a gate

Say what you wanna say
But now we on the same page
Horrible life but it's still not too late
Could do something great to really change my fate
Have better nights and better days and really be okay

Alotta pills I gotta take
It's kinda hard to stay awake
Some thoughts in my brain
Theres a lot of freaking pain

The drugs mask the rain but it still won't go away
The pain jus wanna stay, my heart is blood stained
Alotta nights I prayed
He didn't answer so I felt betrayed
Burning hot like micheals blade
They say it's all jus a phase
Alotta anger, alotta pain, take it out in rage
Did alotta good but never got the praise
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
MODERATORS PLEASE DO NOT DELETE THIS OR BAN ME I REPLACED ALL POTENTIALLY BAD OR INAPPROPRIATE WORDS_ THANK YOU

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ItzDanger · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

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ItzDanger · Answer

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oopdontknowher · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

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Thank you for your support

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ItzDanger · Answer

@badboy1557 wrote:

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badboy1557 · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@badboy1557 wrote:

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Sam360 · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@sam360 wrote:

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ItzDanger · Answer

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cutebunny123 · Answer

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ItzDanger · Answer

@semilore wrote:

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semilore · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@semilore wrote:

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Thanks semi, this means alot to me. Thanks 4 the support

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Ashley29 · Answer

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ItzDanger · Answer

@ashley29 wrote:

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ItzDanger · Answer

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ItzDanger · Answer

@isaac1 wrote:

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5172319 · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@5172319 wrote:

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