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xxitsnotlyahxx:

I wrote this for my dog a while ago. Is it bad? A poem for Jack You’re the one I see when I open my eyes. So very sad we didn’t have proper goodbyes. You’re the moon on a dark night. I can’t help but wishing you were here every night. I loved when we played together, you make my heart sing. I want you back for Christmas, it’s fine if its the only thing. You left my home in April. It’s now November. A day without you here is one I don’t want to remember. I wasn’t here when you left, and that’s what hurts the most. I wanted to grow up with you and go along the coast. But I can’t anymore because you’re not here. Whenever you come back, my colors will appear. I had other dogs but none like you. We stick together anyways. There is no need for glue. I will always love you Jack. You’re not even human but I know you have my back. You were my best friend, and I can’t stand you not being with me. But I will never forget you, I guarantee.

CripQUEZZ:

ur dogs named jack? LMAO

xxitsnotlyahxx:

its actually jackjack but jack 4 short. and nothing is funny. so su

CripQUEZZ:

LOL dead dog? 🤨

xxitsnotlyahxx:

df is wrong w/ u?

CripQUEZZ:

df is wrong wit ya dog?

CripQUEZZ:

no way u take me seriously ur so boring bru

xxitsnotlyahxx:

idfc. he's dead. so honestly fu

xxitsnotlyahxx:

df

CripQUEZZ:

ouuu please f me

ThisGirlPretty:

Be nice, it's okay to give out criticism but don't be rude about it.

CripQUEZZ:

@thisgirlpretty wrote:
Be nice, it's okay to give out criticism but don't be rude about it.
i love you

xxitsnotlyahxx:

Toast.

xxitsnotlyahxx:

toast

xxitsnotlyahxx:

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xxitsnotlyahxx:

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xxitsnotlyahxx:

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xxitsnotlyahxx:

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ThisGirlPretty:

Let's this on topic and avoid spamming please.

CripQUEZZ:

@thisgirlpretty wrote:
Let's this on topic and avoid spamming please.
say i love you back or youre racist

1008426:

Don't be mean to her and her dog I know what it feels like to lose a dog and it is the worst feeling ever, nothing is funny about it. Btw it was a great poem and I loved reading it

CripQUEZZ:

@1008426 wrote:
Don't be mean to her and her dog I know what it feels like to lose a dog and it is the worst feeling ever, nothing is funny about it. Btw it was a great poem and I loved reading it
i have a dead dog too? LOL yall so soft bru this generation is boring asl

1008426:

@cripquezz wrote:
@1008426 wrote:
Don't be mean to her and her dog I know what it feels like to lose a dog and it is the worst feeling ever, nothing is funny about it. Btw it was a great poem and I loved reading it
i have a dead dog too? LOL yall so soft bru this generation is boring asl
yes I do have a dead dog and it hurts like hell so stop

CripQUEZZ:

@1008426 wrote:
@cripquezz wrote:
@1008426 wrote:
Don't be mean to her and her dog I know what it feels like to lose a dog and it is the worst feeling ever, nothing is funny about it. Btw it was a great poem and I loved reading it
i have a dead dog too? LOL yall so soft bru this generation is boring asl
yes I do have a dead dog and it hurts like hell so stop
i have A DEAD DOG TOO bru stop being so soft

xxitsnotlyahxx:

jack is the best dog ever and it was horrible because i haven't seen him since april 2021 and they took him away and he got killed

xxitsnotlyahxx:

so ofc it makes me feel some type of way. a whole year since i felt his fur or i hugged him. thx for that

CripQUEZZ:

@xxitsnotlyahxx wrote:
so ofc it makes me feel some type of way. a whole year since i felt his fur or i hugged him. thx for that
ur lame cryin abt a dog

1008426:

@xxitsnotlyahxx wrote:
jack is the best dog ever and it was horrible because i haven't seen him since april 2021 and they took him away and he got killed
I'm sorry for your loss

xxitsnotlyahxx:

thank you for understanding

1008426:

@xxitsnotlyahxx wrote:
thank you for understanding
np

daddywolfhotstuff:

i love it and i feel so bad for you and your dog bless both your souls

daddywolfhotstuff:

hope you and your dog reunite

xxitsnotlyahxx:

@daddywolfhotstuff wrote:
i love it and i feel so bad for you and your dog bless both your souls
thxx:)

xxitsnotlyahxx:

@daddywolfhotstuff wrote:
hope you and your dog reunite
we will eventually

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