made a poem again, why not i guess

and fair warning before you hop on my case, this isnt directed to anyone. i just write these poems so i can figure out what kind of poems i like writing so i can improve on it.

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Why must your presence surround me?
I wish I could blow it away.
Why does your existence invade my mind like a plague?
I wish I could wash it off.
Must you really ruin my day,
Be the tornado amidst the thunder,
The thorn among the roses?
Is it necessary to be the pest,
The rats in the wall,
The occasional spider making it's nest?
I can't tell you to quit being these things,
You're your own person.
Either way I see it,
you'll still be a beautiful annoyance to me.

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made a poem again, why not i guess

and fair warning before you hop on my case, this isnt directed to anyone. i just write these poems so i can figure out what kind of poems i like writing so i can improve on it.

Untitled Poem

Why must your presence surround me?
I wish I could blow it away.
Why does your existence invade my mind like a plague?
I wish I could wash it off.
Must you really ruin my day,
Be the tornado amidst the thunder,
The thorn among the roses?
Is it necessary to be the pest, 
The rats in the wall,
The occasional spider making it's nest?
I can't tell you to quit being these things,
You're your own person.
Either way I see it,
you'll still be a beautiful annoyance to me.

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

This is great. I love it. I feel the emotions.

Astrid1 · Answer

I like it !

Mooshroom · Answer

I really like these! U should really keep going u might be able to become a poet

Fortish · Answer

I love it! i'd love to read more <3

Joe348 · Answer

Bro this poem just gave me an idea<3

Sharkattack123 · Answer

I rlly like it

100k · Answer

Love it