My love poem, called letter to my soulmate
I fell in love with your pretty smile,
I wanna watch your dad walk you down the aisle.
You take my breath away and when I look at you I'm okay
When I'm crying in your arms at night tell me everything's alright.
Tell me what I gotta do.
I'm sick of living life without you
I can be a lot to handle so please bare with me,
without my best friend my life's so empty
I wanna spend my life with you
I'm hoping maybe you would want to do that to?
And when I cant understand why I matter
I look into your eyes and find all the answers
I wont let you go to waste
And you wont let nobody take my place
you're my saving grace.
I'm thinking about turning it into a song, what do you think?

Question

My love poem, called letter to my soulmate
I fell in love with your pretty smile,
I wanna watch your dad walk you down the aisle.
You take my breath away and when I look at you I'm okay
When I'm crying in your arms at night tell me everything's alright.
 Tell me what I gotta do.
I'm sick of living life without you
I can be a lot to handle so please bare with me,
without my best friend my life's so empty 
I wanna spend my life with you 
I'm hoping maybe you would want to do that to?
And when I cant understand why I matter
I look into your eyes and find all the answers
I wont let you go to waste
And you wont let nobody take my place
you're my saving grace. 
I'm thinking about turning it into a song, what do you think?

TurtleFlash · Answer

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Flippy · Answer

I forgot to do the spaces smh. But yeah I'm thinking about turning it into a song

TurtleFlash · Answer

Ur cool!

Flippy · Answer

you too :D

Flippy · Answer

@turtleflash wrote:

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tysmm

TurtleFlash · Answer

Np

TurtleFlash · Answer

And here is ur post re-corrected

My love poem, called "Letter to My Soulmate,"
I fell in love with your pretty smile.
I want to watch your dad walk you down the aisle.
You take my breath away and when I look at you, I'm okay.
When I'm crying in your arms at night, tell me everything's alright.
Tell me what I've got to do.
I'm sick of living life without you.
I can be a lot to handle, so please bare with me.
Without my best friend, my life's so empty.
I want to spend my life with you.
I'm hoping maybe you will want to do that too.
And when I don't understand why I'm important
I look into your eyes and find all the answers.
I'm not going to let you go to waste.
And you won't let anybody take my place.
You're my saving grace. 
I'm thinking about turning it into a song. What do you think?

TurtleFlash · Answer

I uses a grammar checker for it

oopdontknowher · Answer

this should def be a song and it is amazingggg

BarbieJoo · Answer

I love it!! And yeah you should turn it into a song!

itzMaxiewillow12 · Answer

love it girl

elliana01 · Answer

I love itt!! Its greatt! <33

Flippy · Answer

@elliana01 wrote:

I love itt!! Its greatt! <33

tysmmm <3

Flippy · Answer

@itzmaxiewillow12 wrote:

love it girl

thanks shawtyyy

Flippy · Answer

@barbiejoo wrote:

I love it!! And yeah you should turn it into a song!

Thanks! Im thinking about what I should do

Flippy · Answer

like, the beat and what not

Flippy · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

this should def be a song and it is amazingggg

thanks girlie

yourhispanicgf · Answer

woowwwwww coolllll

iwantarveal · Answer

Your poem is super good and i think it would be good if its a song

valendimartino · Answer

I love it! turn it into a song, will be amazing.

Flippy · Answer

@yourhispanicgf wrote:

woowwwwww coolllll

Flippy · Answer

@iwantarveal wrote:

Your poem is super good and i think it would be good if its a song

tysmm

Flippy · Answer

@valendimartino wrote:

I love it! turn it into a song, will be amazing.

okiee

vivian · Answer

wow whoever you  merry will be one lucky person.

vivian · Answer

I am no good at writing but I am good at graphic design.

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