Question

"Death"
by:me

Thoughts of death are surrounding me,
Is this a choice, a good choice for me,
I wonder, oh I wonder how it would be,
Without me in the picture
And everyone else is happy,
Im scared, so scared to act upon it,
If I make this choice, how would the world be,
Missing someone and that person is me,
Would people move on like nothing happened,
Would people smile like they didn’t care,
Death, yes death would maybe sting,
I struggle these though each day and hour,
Maybe death, oh yes death is best for me,

Answer 1

Really nice!

Answer 2

i like it

Answer 3

I love thiss omgg

Answer 4

Very emotional; very heartfelt. You did a good job in choosing your choice in words. Very Very beautiful.

Answer 5

I love how you pull the readers in with that ominous tone and give some people something to relate to

Answer 6

If you have any request just dm me!

Answer 7

I can relate to this cuz i feel death

Answer 8

I'm scared and intrigued when I'm reading this.

Answer 9

OOP

Answer 10

amazing great job holly!

Answer 11

quandale dingle said "you wont"