please tell me if this is good..if not please be honest..thanks in advance..

When he hugs me
Nothing else is there
like i'm levitating

When he smiles
My body begins to tremble
I slowly start to stare

His smile
So divine

It's hard to really open
When my heart is the one on the line

It's hard to think he loves me
When all I've gotten was broken

It's hard to love him
When everyone takes my love for granted

He claims his love is different
I have no choice
I’m just gonna believe it

I love him
And I hope he knows
Even though it may not show
I love him so.

Question

please tell me if this is good..if not please be honest..thanks in advance..

When he hugs me 
Nothing else is there
like i'm levitating

When he smiles 
My body begins to tremble 
I slowly start to stare

His smile
So divine

It's hard to really open
When my heart is the one on the line

It's hard to think he loves me 
When all I've gotten was broken

It's hard to love him 
When everyone takes my love for granted

He claims his love is different
I have no choice
I’m just gonna believe it

I love him 
And I hope he knows
Even though it may not show
I love him so.

Sollums · Answer

Good<3

105002424 · Answer

This is honestly very beautiful and specific to physical touch! I'm gonna send this to my boyfriend thank u! You did very good!

Chop · Answer

yes

Sailor · Answer

Honestly this is pretty good keep it up

Cheythepie56 · Answer

This is really good keep it up

5172319 · Answer

Honestly I think it's really nice

5172319 · Answer

And just like... good

Emoweeb007 · Answer

This is so......how do I say this..... It has beautiful and emotional words and I really feel like I connect to it.

Killergg33 · Answer

Same here

Victorya · Answer

@sollums wrote:

Good<3

thx

Victorya · Answer

@105002424 wrote:

This is honestly very beautiful and specific to physical touch! I'm gonna send this to my boyfriend thank u! You did very good!

tysm

Victorya · Answer

@chop wrote:

yes

thx

Victorya · Answer

@sailor wrote:

Honestly this is pretty good keep it up

ty

Victorya · Answer

@cheythepie56 wrote:

This is really good keep it up

thx

Victorya · Answer

@5172319 wrote:

Honestly I think it's really nice

thank you

Victorya · Answer

@emoweeb007 wrote:

This is so......how do I say this..... It has beautiful and emotional words and I really feel like I connect to it.

tysm

Victorya · Answer

@killergg33 wrote:

Same here

thx

Sailor · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@sailor wrote:

Honestly this is pretty good keep it up

ty

Anytime

Victorya · Answer

@vietress wrote:

I like it :)

thx

XxxBunnyxxX · Answer

aww vickyyy <3 i loved it

Victorya · Answer

@xxxbunnyxxx wrote:

aww vickyyy <3 i loved it

tysm avi

XxxBunnyxxX · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@xxxbunnyxxx wrote:

aww vickyyy <3 i loved it

tysm avi

yw <33

xXANIMELOVERXx · Answer

This is amazing! Can I use it? I would love to!

Victorya · Answer

@xxanimeloverxx wrote:

This is amazing! Can I use it? I would love to!

yea

xXANIMELOVERXx · Answer

Tysm!

Victorya · Answer

@xxanimeloverxx wrote:

Tysm!

ofc

KenzieXD · Answer

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

Victorya · Answer

@kenziexd wrote:

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

aw ty

KenzieXD · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@kenziexd wrote:

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

aw ty

ur so very welcome! also if i could speak for all of us id say we all love u!

Victorya · Answer

@kenziexd wrote:

@victorya wrote:

@kenziexd wrote:

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

aw ty

ur so very welcome! also if i could speak for all of us id say we all love u!

oh uhm ok

KenzieXD · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@kenziexd wrote:

@victorya wrote:

@kenziexd wrote:

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

aw ty

ur so very welcome! also if i could speak for all of us id say we all love u!

oh uhm ok

as friends lol!

Victorya · Answer

@kenziexd wrote:

@victorya wrote:

ok

@kenziexd wrote:

@victorya wrote:

@kenziexd wrote:

this is so beautiful I love it! i feel so touched by this! Thanks for sharing this with us! I can only speak for myself but if i could speak for everyone id say we all love it!

aw ty

ur so very welcome! also if i could speak for all of us id say we all love u!

oh uhm ok

as friends lol!

Victorya · Answer

ok

KenzieXD · Answer

i wish ppl would actually look at my song i maid

Victorya · Answer

@kenziexd wrote:

i wish ppl would actually look at my song i maid

there u go