Wrote this poem awhile ago tell me your thoughts._trigger warning this is a death letter I Wrote before my attempt_
"Morning sun Evening stars. The highways fun alot of cars. The pain jus hurts I wanna cry. A brand new birth with a Suicide. People come and then they go. Stuck on the roam without a home. Like a rose my blood is red. My heart just froze yeah It is dead.

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Wrote this poem awhile ago  tell me your thoughts._trigger warning this is a death letter I Wrote before my attempt_
"Morning sun Evening stars. The highways fun alot of cars. The pain jus hurts I wanna cry. A brand new birth with a Suicide. People come and then they go. Stuck on the roam without a home. Like a rose my blood is red. My heart just froze yeah It is dead.

MusicKid · Answer

i think its a good poem

ItzDanger · Answer

@musickid wrote:

i think its a good poem

Thank you for your support

Killergg33 · Answer

Same here great poem

ItzDanger · Answer

@killergg33 wrote:

Same here great poem

Thanks broski

RinaRinaBoBina · Answer

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PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

@rinarinabobina wrote:

Created with RaphaëlI really like it. It hits deep, as it should!Reply Using Drawing

Deeper than any blade.

RinaRinaBoBina · Answer

@poseidongodofthesea wrote:

@rinarinabobina wrote:

Created with RaphaëlI really like it. It hits deep, as it should!Reply Using Drawing

Deeper than any blade.

true! deeper than your fork too lol

PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

@rinarinabobina wrote:

@poseidongodofthesea wrote:

@rinarinabobina wrote:

Created with RaphaëlI really like it. It hits deep, as it should!Reply Using Drawing

Deeper than any blade.

true! deeper than your fork too lol

That is not funny and its a Trident

Fortish · Answer

Love it.

Emoweeb007 · Answer

It's nice. You have talent I wish I had.

ItzDanger · Answer

@emoweeb007 wrote:

It's nice. You have talent I wish I had.

You do have talent. You can do whatever you put your mind towards.

Emoweeb007 · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

@emoweeb007 wrote:

It's nice. You have talent I wish I had.

You do have talent. You can do whatever you put your mind towards.

Thank you. That means a lot.

ItzDanger · Answer

@emoweeb007 wrote:

@itzdanger wrote:

@emoweeb007 wrote:

It's nice. You have talent I wish I had.

You do have talent. You can do whatever you put your mind towards.

Thank you. That means a lot.

Ofc broski. Live your dreams, Don't let anybody make them jus fantasise