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Aurxlina:

Write an essay on Life of a teenage girl (250 words) Someone please help asap!!!!!!!!!!!

Aurxlina:

@elsa213 @allison @totallynotjay

Aurxlina:

@prettygirl09

TotallyNotJay:

how exactly do I help?

Aurxlina:

I want u to write an essay on the topic life of a teenage girl about 250 words

TotallyNotJay:

can I be myself?

Aurxlina:

In the essay you need to describe the problems u face as a teenager and how u intend to solve them

Aurxlina:

Yes

TotallyNotJay:

@totallynotjay wrote:
can I be myself?
it* and ok

Aurxlina:

Ok so will u help me with the essay?

TotallyNotJay:

@aurxlina wrote:
Ok so will u help me with the essay?
sure

Aurxlina:

how long will u take?

ThisGirlPretty:

You're suppose to write the essay yourself. Have you started on it? Or need help starting?

Aurxlina:

I started but i only wrote like 113-135 words or maybe less

Aurxlina:

wait let me count

TotallyNotJay:

@aurxlina wrote:
how long will u take?
Probably 15- 30 mins is that ok?

fefe8143:

I'ma do it to

fefe8143:

Jay das 2 long

fefe8143:

Nah I'm jp

TotallyNotJay:

-_-

fefe8143:

But I got that same question

Aurxlina:

I wrote 150 words @thisgirlpretty wanna see?

fefe8143:

Bc I'm helping autistic kids do work

Aurxlina:

@totallynotjay wrote:
@aurxlina wrote:
how long will u take?
Probably 15- 30 mins is that ok?
tysmm

Sailor:

We can't write it for you, but we can guide you.

Aurxlina:

@fefe8143 wrote:
I'ma do it to
Oki tysmm

fefe8143:

Np n let me see what u got so far

Sailor:

Writing the essay for you is like giving a direct answer. Which breaks a rule. e.e So what don't you understand about this essay? Maybe we could help in some way?

Aurxlina:

@sailor wrote:
Writing the essay for you is like giving a direct answer. Which breaks a rule. e.e So what don't you understand about this essay? Maybe we could help in some way?
idk how to write abt the problems ik wht problems they face but idk how to desribe and stuff

xxDeppressionxx:

I can help with that, but imma need some more information on what you are doing.

Sailor:

@aurxlina wrote:
@sailor wrote:
Writing the essay for you is like giving a direct answer. Which breaks a rule. e.e So what don't you understand about this essay? Maybe we could help in some way?
idk how to write abt the problems ik wht problems they face but idk how to desribe and stuff
Well a big problem that they definitely face is drama for sure. And their insecurity about how they look, etc.

xxDeppressionxx:

Ik it is an essay

xxDeppressionxx:

It’s not giving them a direct answer unless you are typing it foe them, if they need help imma help them thats what i do.

fefe8143:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Ik it is an essay
Kind of it is but it depends on the topic

fefe8143:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
It’s not giving them a direct answer unless you are typing it foe them, if they need help imma help them thats what i do.
Rii

ThisGirlPretty:

@aurxlina wrote:
I wrote 150 words @thisgirlpretty wanna see?
Yes please c:

fefe8143:

So it's Jay me n trapgod one him

fefe8143:

Wit the help

xxDeppressionxx:

Did you write most of it, or did you need help with the whole thing?

fefe8143:

I think he needs help with the whole thing

fefe8143:

Sum wht u got so far

xxDeppressionxx:

Well imma let them answer the question.

TotallyNotJay:

@aurxlina I'm gonna write one probably with more words but hopefully it can give you ideas

fefe8143:

Jay u not supposed to do tht

xxDeppressionxx:

@joseph122 if you are not helping please delete your comment. Thank youj!🙏.

Sailor:

@totallynotjay wrote:
@aurxlina I'm gonna write one probably with more words but hopefully it can give you ideas
If you write it for her you give her a direct answer, you can't do that.

fefe8143:

Let him do sum on his own

fefe8143:

First

Aurxlina:

This is what I wrote. Teenage years begin from 13 to 18 yrs old. I am a teenager who enjoys life but sometimes its very complicated and difficult.This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the starting of puberty, we get acne and it might stick around during adolescene but it disappears by the end of adolescene.Girls bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop.Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsive.They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This believe in self worth and power lead to the feeling of egocentrism.Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety,depression,lower self eesteeem, and anger issues.

xxDeppressionxx:

Sounds like me, lol.

Aurxlina:

@totallynotjay wrote:
@aurxlina I'm gonna write one probably with more words but hopefully it can give you ideas
I want u to write one bc ion rlly like my essay.

Sailor:

@aurxlina wrote:
This is what I wrote. Teenage years begin from 13 to 18 yrs old. I am a teenager who enjoys life but sometimes its very complicated and difficult.This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the starting of puberty, we get acne and it might stick around during adolescene but it disappears by the end of adolescene.Girls bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop.Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsive.They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This believe in self worth and power lead to the feeling of egocentrism.Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety,depression,lower self eesteeem, and anger issues.
So far that's actually pretty good.

Aurxlina:

Thnx

xxDeppressionxx:

Yea you just need some corrections.

Aurxlina:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Did you write most of it, or did you need help with the whole thing?
need help with all of it

Aurxlina:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Yea you just need some corrections.
Ok please correct and help me describing the problems teens face in dms.

Joseph122:

well thats not half bed r u on google dox.. if so theres a way to keep a word count

fefe8143:

Yea like said

TotallyNotJay:

@fefe8143 wrote:
Jay u not supposed to do tht
bruh I said to give them ideas not give them exact answers

xxDeppressionxx:

Got you, imma help you with the whole thing but you need to explain to me what’s it about.

fefe8143:

But will your teacher notice

Aurxlina:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Got you, imma help you with the whole thing but you need to explain to me what’s it about.
Ok

xxDeppressionxx:

No they shouldn’t. This is a homework site so you should be good.

Aurxlina:

@fefe8143 wrote:
But will your teacher notice
notice what?

Sailor:

Better grammar would help you get a better grade, so I'm pretty sure that would help out. Where it says "anxiety,depression,lower self eesteeem,....", you could add spaces to make the list easier to read. Kind of like this: "anxiety, depression, lower self eesteeem,.." By the way the three dots show that the sentence continues.

fefe8143:

That yhu got help

Joseph122:

@aurxlina just put bits and pices of ur life story until u fit the word count

Sailor:

@aurxlina wrote:
@fefe8143 wrote:
But will your teacher notice
notice what?
If someone gives you the answer the teacher can easily figure out that someone wrote it for you based on your writing and the other person's writing, So it's best to not even bother and copy other people's stuff.

Aurxlina:

@sailor wrote:
@aurxlina wrote:
@fefe8143 wrote:
But will your teacher notice
notice what?
If someone gives you the answer the teacher can easily figure out that someone wrote it for you based on your writing and the other person's writing, So it's best to not even bother and copy other people's stuff.
Nope she wont

Joseph122:

I mean the teacher might not bc its 2 different students and there not in the same class

xxDeppressionxx:

Here are the corrections to it, The teenage years begin at 13 to 18 years old. I am a teenager who enjoys life, but sometimes it is very complicated and difficult. This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the beginning of puberty, we get acne, and it might stick around during adolescence, but it disappears by the end of adolescence. Girls' bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop. Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsively. They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This belief in self-worth and power leads to the feeling of egocentrism. Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety, depression, lower self-esteem, and anger issues.

Joseph122:

wait why am I help... this is wierd byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Sailor:

e.e Alright then, well when they see that it isn't your writing that's on you..

fefe8143:

Ok

fefe8143:

I'll be bl

fefe8143:

Bk

Aurxlina:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Here are the corrections to it, The teenage years begin at 13 to 18 years old. I am a teenager who enjoys life, but sometimes it is very complicated and difficult. This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the beginning of puberty, we get acne, and it might stick around during adolescence, but it disappears by the end of adolescence. Girls' bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop. Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsively. They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This belief in self-worth and power leads to the feeling of egocentrism. Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety, depression, lower self-esteem, and anger issues.
this should be the intro??

xxDeppressionxx:

So, you can edit it if you need to just copy it and re-edit it when you can.

Aurxlina:

ok

Joseph122:

@aurxlina wrote:
@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Here are the corrections to it, The teenage years begin at 13 to 18 years old. I am a teenager who enjoys life, but sometimes it is very complicated and difficult. This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the beginning of puberty, we get acne, and it might stick around during adolescence, but it disappears by the end of adolescence. Girls' bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop. Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsively. They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This belief in self-worth and power leads to the feeling of egocentrism. Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety, depression, lower self-esteem, and anger issues.
this should be the intro??
yes make that the into just add ur name

xxDeppressionxx:

Yes, that sounds good.

fefe8143:

Yea it should

Aurxlina:

@joseph122 wrote:
@aurxlina wrote:
@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
Here are the corrections to it, The teenage years begin at 13 to 18 years old. I am a teenager who enjoys life, but sometimes it is very complicated and difficult. This is the period when a person goes through a lot of physical and hormonal changes. During the beginning of puberty, we get acne, and it might stick around during adolescence, but it disappears by the end of adolescence. Girls' bodies become curvier, they gain weight on their hips and their breasts develop. Menstruation is a taboo and most people avoid talking about it.They start to care about how their actions affect others.They also start to want to be accepted and liked.They tend to act impulsively. They also start to feel that they can do anything with their lives.This belief in self-worth and power leads to the feeling of egocentrism. Some of the most common issues teens face are anxiety, depression, lower self-esteem, and anger issues.
this should be the intro??
yes make that the into just add ur name
Ok then what should i write in body?

Aurxlina:

My teacher asked me to make the intro 60-75 words,body 150 words and conclusion 50-60

Joseph122:

give a little bachground were u grew up what is was like growing up were u rich or poor

xxDeppressionxx:

Idk where does this teenager live and who does they live with?

xxDeppressionxx:

Yeah we need some background info about where they live.

fefe8143:

@joseph122 wrote:
give a little bachground were u grew up what is was like growing up were u rich or poor
Yea tht make since

Joseph122:

what conditions did u live in that would be a good body

fefe8143:

Poor most likely

fefe8143:

Bc it come out where you grew from the odd to the better like frl

Joseph122:

ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house

Joseph122:

ok she said give her 5 mins

Aurxlina:

@joseph122 wrote:
give a little bachground were u grew up what is was like growing up were u rich or poor
poor

fefe8143:

Cuz if u put rich n can do rich to poor but I water use poor

Joseph122:

@joseph122 wrote:
ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house
I was poor

fefe8143:

@joseph122 wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house
I was poor
Same like most did

Joseph122:

BUT WE did have a 37 acre back yard with horses

Aurxlina:

@joseph122 wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house
I was poor
r u rich now

Joseph122:

@aurxlina wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house
I was poor
r u rich now
I mean with $5,000 in the bank I'm getting there

ThisGirlPretty:

We should keep this on topic peeps ~

Aurxlina:

@joseph122 wrote:
@aurxlina wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
@joseph122 wrote:
ya TBH I grew up in a trailer house
I was poor
r u rich now
I mean with $5,000 in the bank I'm getting there
how old ru

Aurxlina:

@thisgirlpretty wrote:
We should keep this on topic peeps ~
oh yep

Joseph122:

yo TGP has spoken the's get back on topic plz

Joseph122:

ok hows ur body commin

Joseph122:

hows the body paragraph coming

Aurxlina:

@rllyty helped me

Joseph122:

ah ok

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