So i wrote a poem and wanted to know how yall felt about it! (Please tell me your true opinions,Its okay if its bad.I need to know so i can do better in the future!)

Walking alone but not sad,
Just thinking of all the memories we had.
Wishing I would have never met you,
Now you got me out here feeling all blue.

Wondering why did you have to go so soon,
Even when it was only early at noon.
Thinking every minute and every hour,
About how your love was so sour.

Treated me like i wasnt even real,
So now im going to give you a deal.
Love me or leave me,
But dont just say you need me.

Everything about you was just so fake,
So just leave me alone for goodness sake!

Question

So i wrote a poem and wanted to know how yall felt about it! (Please tell me your true opinions,Its okay if its bad.I need to know so i can do better in the future!)

Walking alone but not sad,
Just thinking of all the memories we had.
Wishing I would have never met you,
Now you got me out here feeling all blue.

Wondering why did you have to go so soon,
Even when it was only early at noon.
Thinking every minute and every hour,
About how your love was so sour.

Treated me like i wasnt even real,
So now im going to give you a deal.
Love me or leave me,
But dont just say you need me.

Everything about you was just so fake,
So just leave me alone for goodness sake!

semilore · Answer

Aw I love it Bsff Good jobb.. <33

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@semilore wrote:

Aw I love it Bsff Good jobb.. <33

tyyyy <333

ItzDanger · Answer

Dis is amazing. Keep up the great work

baddielee · Answer

Love it💕❣💜