Question

Do you guys like how I started my new story? It's called, "Stole My Heart." Here you go guys! Enjoy!

A girl was sitting on a chair and having a journal in her hands. Her long brown hair was on her back, a pencil was in her hand, and she had headphones on which were full of music. Her head was swaying with the beat. She was humming softly, without knowing it.

She seemed so perfect. Her brown autumn eyes were blinking slowly but she had no pressure. The intercom around her didn’t disturb the girl. She had only one thing on her mind, Art. The music didn’t stop.

People around looked at her, but she did not mind. She seemed to have it all. She wasn't writing, she was drawing. The pencil swayed until there was a drawing. A voice of a teenage boy was outside the headphones, she took the headphones off.

Answer 1

cule it sounds quirky like a girl wrote it yk

Answer 2

IDK- lol. Idk how to write a good story yk?

Answer 3

well for a beginner your pretty good:)

Answer 4

Thank you! Here you go a medal! That means the world to me! THANK YOU! :D

Answer 5

yea anytime just keep working on it your bound to make it a profession your a natural

Answer 6

Wow, he's really nice...I bet he dosen't wanna be friends...but it's fine.