hey so i wrote a poem cause why not but idk if it good btw this was t my loving caring dad

When tears fell from my eyes,
you were there to brush them away.
When I was lost in confusion,
you were there to say that everything would be okay.
When I stood before you falling apart,
you were there to lend your heart.
When I felt like no one could understand,
you were there to take my hand.
When no one else was left to care,
you were there.

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hey so i wrote a poem cause why not but idk if it good btw this was t my loving caring dad

When tears fell from my eyes,
you were there to brush them away.
When I was lost in confusion,
you were there to say that everything would be okay.
When I stood before you falling apart,
you were there to lend your heart.
When I felt like no one could understand,
you were there to take my hand.
When no one else was left to care,
you were there.

imhotterthenu · Answer

yea

BrokenAngel07 · Answer

I think it's really good, I love it. And look forward to seeing more from you<3