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ItzDanger:

here's a song I wrote a few weeks ago. Lmk what you think. --TRIGGER WARNING:THIS IS A SUICIDE SONG-- I have a damaged soul wanna cry, wanna die this stuff is getting so dang old suicide ain't no lie 17 years old nobody else to hold my actions always bold truth be said truth be told thoughts in my head I wanna be dead I feel like a loser with nothing left yeah that's what I said sitting on my bed thinking bout death all over again stay be staring at the ceiling trying to figure out what i'm feeling I try to be the realest but none of you wanna feel it Alotta thoughts and that's how I flow alotta pain but thats how I roll people come and that's when they go maybe I won't But I wanna fold you ask how I feel and you want the truth I wanna be real the things I've been thru Slowly I'll heal the things I live to do And thats to care for you and you ain't even know always open and closing the door I really need you whats all the hate for you always seem to give more loving ppl is not my sport I have a damaged soul wanna cry, wanna die this stuff is getting so dang old suicide ain't no lie 17 years old nobody else to hold my actions always bold truth be said truth be told thoughts in my head I wanna be dead I feel like a loser with nothing left yeah that's what I said sitting on my bed thinking bout death all over again _______________________________ Moderators Please Don't Ban Me. I replaced all potentially bad words

XxIceBearsWifexX:

This is a really nice song/poem and I def can relate to this, but you did pretty good, and if this is about you then I'm sorry you feel this way. <3

QueenBrii:

I really like dis brudda . Yk I got u erry step stay strong and I fw it

sam1235:

I dont know you but I dont want you to feel this way. Im here for u every step of that way and if u ever wanna talk to someone, you can trust me, i promise

DoubleEncrustedToe:

Sign this man to Atlanta Records

DoubleEncrustedToe:

@doubleencrustedtoe wrote:
Sign this man to Atlanta Records
Atlantic Records*****

SmolPotato:

This really fire bro, people need this in dey life. Not all that fake shii the real shii; the truth and thats what u bring in this song. Man dis is fire bro ngl keep it up. Stay strong and don't never let anyone tell u can't do sum or ill smash they face xD

5172319:

I feel this. Thxx for posting it. Its really good

Fortish:

Wow love it :)

straightShooter:

Yo this is amazing but you should let me rewrite parts of it so it flows smoother. I got ideas

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