here is a essay for dance that i wrote and i need to know if there is anything i need to fix before i submit it.

The spring concert made me feel a wave of different emotions. I felt sad, happy, and excited. The three dances that appealed to me the most were Imperfections, No Escape From Death, and Catastrophe. The reason why I am writing this paper is to critique their dances.
To begin with, Imperfections was a really good dance. Their movements went with the music, and I felt the energy they were giving off. In the dance, I felt as if they were feeling like they were not perfect enough, like they dont fit in because they dont meet the beauty standards society makes. The dance had a sad tone to it and their expressions made the whole dance come together. There is honestly nothing bad I can say about this performance.
Secondly, No Escape From Death was also a really great performance. The only bad thing I have to say about the dance was it was a little off key. The movements from everyone were not on the same key, and didnt hit all of the beats like some of the other dancers did. The vibe and feeling it gave off to me was like everything was going bad and they were trying to let all of the bad energy behind them and in the past, to move on to a better and more pure life. Even though some of the dancers didnt match the energy the others were giving off, they pulled the performance together and did a really good job.
Lastly, Catastrophe was the best performace yet. It gave me a sad and gloomy feeling, and as I said before, the expressions and emotions they put in the dance matched perfectly with the music. The outfits were on point, the gloomy colored greyish blue really set the whole performance off. The lighting was perfect. The movements were on key with the beats and I felt the energy they were giving off.
In conclusion, I really enjoyed watching the performances in the spring concert. All three dances were my favorite and I will gladly go back to another one of Leesburg High School spring dance concerts.

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here is a essay for dance that i wrote and i need to know if there is anything i need to fix before i submit it.

The spring concert made me feel a wave of different emotions. I felt sad, happy, and excited. The three dances that appealed to me the most were Imperfections, No Escape From Death, and Catastrophe. The reason why I am writing this paper is to critique their dances.
	To begin with, Imperfections was a really good dance. Their movements went with the music, and I felt the energy they were giving off. In the dance, I felt as if they were feeling like they were not perfect enough, like they dont fit in because they dont meet the beauty standards society makes. The dance had a sad tone to it and their expressions made the whole dance come together. There is honestly nothing bad I can say about this performance.
Secondly, No Escape From Death was also a really great performance. The only bad thing I have to say about the dance was it was a little off key. The movements from everyone were not on the same key, and didnt hit all of the beats like some of the other dancers did. The vibe and feeling it gave off to me was like everything was going bad and they were trying to let all of the bad energy behind them and in the past, to move on to a better and more pure life. Even though some of the dancers didnt match the energy the others were giving off, they pulled the performance together and did a really good job.
Lastly, Catastrophe was the best performace yet. It gave me a sad and gloomy feeling, and as I said before, the expressions and emotions they put in the dance matched perfectly with the music. The outfits were on point, the gloomy colored greyish blue really set the whole performance off. The lighting was perfect. The movements were on key with the beats and I felt the energy they were giving off. 
In conclusion, I really enjoyed watching the performances in the spring concert. All three dances were my favorite and I will gladly go back to another one of Leesburg High School spring dance concerts.

theyadoreshayyy · Answer

there is indents in between each paragraph, idk why its not on here

PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

Hmmm its fine

theyadoreshayyy · Answer

so i should submit it ? theres nothing i need to fix or add ?

PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

If its an essay maybe add your name at the top

theyadoreshayyy · Answer

okay thank youuu

PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

Np