I wrote this because I can't tell people how i feel but people keep bothering me to tell someone.....So... i would like honest feedback on it....

I wanna die
Pointer finger on the trigger
Blade to my wrist
Let the blood spill out
I don't care which way
I just don't wanna live
No longer in existence
Extinct i will be
With my bones in a casket
Maybe there's a place for me
Where there is no more pain
No more dying
No more crying
I'm tired of living in this place
Where there is no place you can go to without being judged
No home you can go to and have peace
In this society
There is not a single piece of hope
Left for me
--Victorya.H

Question

I wrote this because I can't tell people how i feel but people keep bothering me to tell someone.....So... i would like honest feedback on it....

I wanna die
Pointer finger on the trigger
Blade to my wrist 
Let the blood spill out
I don't care which way 
I just don't wanna live
No longer in existence
Extinct i will be 
With my bones in a casket
Maybe there's a place for me
Where there is no more pain
No more dying
No more crying 
I'm tired of living in this place
Where there is no place you can go to without being judged
No home you can go to and have peace
 In this society
There is not a single piece of hope
Left for me
                                                     --Victorya.H

Aj3aiden · Answer

hits a spot fr my life right there this really means something well thought out dark n light

JoshSimmons999 · Answer

I-

Victorya · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

hits a spot fr my life right there this really means something well thought out dark n light

ok thx ig

Aj3aiden · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@aj3aiden wrote:

hits a spot fr my life right there this really means something well thought out dark n light

ok thx ig

Its great and true

Victorya · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

@victorya wrote:

@aj3aiden wrote:

hits a spot fr my life right there this really means something well thought out dark n light

ok thx ig

Its great and true

ty

Aj3aiden · Answer

Its beautiful

Victorya · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

Its beautiful

tysm

Aj3aiden · Answer

Ofc

Aj3aiden · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

Its beautiful

just like you

Victorya · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

Its beautiful

just like you

im not but okay

Aj3aiden · Answer

u r

Victorya · Answer

@aj3aiden wrote:

u r

i am not

Aj3aiden · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@aj3aiden wrote:

u r

i am not

stop arguing ur beautiful

1008426 · Answer

this is so good, i hope your life turns around for the better, and all goes well for you

kai6665 · Answer

this very nice, great job, hope your life gets much better in every catagory ( i know i spelled that wrong)

Victorya · Answer

@1008426 wrote:

this is so good, i hope your life turns around for the better, and all goes well for you

thank you

Victorya · Answer

@kai6665 wrote:

this very nice, great job, hope your life gets much better in every catagory ( i know i spelled that wrong)

thank you

imtohotforyouanyway · Answer

Girl wth🫵🏽😆