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Krissy525:

Here's a little poem I did @Spiralredd @Prachiyogeshpatel Love By: me Love, it’s the connection We all need And you are the band-aid When I bleed When I can’t sleep at night You always hold me tight When you say ‘I love you’ I think of all you do Love, it’s what has Kept us near It’s what keeps us grinning From ear to ear No matter what Other people might say I will always love you The exact same way Love, it may be a word With only four letters But when I think of it I always feel better It’s what kept us together For all these years Even throughout All the tears

emilee234:

soooooooo true and so cute

Krissy525:

thank you

emilee234:

np

1008426:

Aw it’s really good

Krissy525:

@1008426 wrote:
Aw it’s really good
thnx

1008426:

@krissy525 wrote:
@1008426 wrote:
Aw it’s really good
thnx
Npp

Aiden3j:

Amazing

Krissy525:

@aiden3j wrote:
Amazing

Krissy525:

@aiden3j wrote:
Amazing
thnx

SarahCookie17:

I love this

Krissy525:

@sarahcookie17 wrote:
I love this
thnx

Prachiyogeshpatel:

Aww I love it

SarahCookie17:

@krissy525 wrote:
@sarahcookie17 wrote:
I love this
thnx
yw

100k:

lovely, good job

Krissy525:

@prachiyogeshpatel wrote:
Aww I love it
thank you <333333333

Krissy525:

@100k wrote:
lovely, good job
thnx

iHeartjulesx:

This is really sweet :)

itzmeee:

i really loved this poem ur so talented!

princemagic:

kool

Mashupa:

Yuh

darkknight:

Fix punctuation so it matches the flow, as well as word choice maybe. Its close but not 100% but you getting there

ItzDanger:

Very good, Keep up the great work

PoseidonGodOfTheSea:

Hm, I've seen better, but Nicely Done B)

Sharkattack123:

Love is bs, but nice 😄

kai6665:

amazing job!

Krissy525:

@iheartjulesx wrote:
This is really sweet :)
thnx

Krissy525:

@itzmeee wrote:
i really loved this poem ur so talented!
Thank you

Krissy525:

@mashupa wrote:
Yuh
Thnx for that, I wrote this like 2 years ago, and I will apply that advice on future poems

Krissy525:

@princemagic wrote:
kool
Thanks

Krissy525:

@itzdanger wrote:
Very good, Keep up the great work
Thanks

Krissy525:

@poseidongodofthesea wrote:
Hm, I've seen better, but Nicely Done B)
Thnx

Krissy525:

@krissy525 wrote:
@mashupa wrote:
Yuh
Thnx for that, I wrote this like 2 years ago, and I will apply that advice on future poems
Wrong person sorry

Krissy525:

@sharkattack123 wrote:
Love is bs, but nice 😄
Thnx lol

Krissy525:

@kai6665 wrote:
amazing job!
Thnx

Krissy525:

@darkknight wrote:
Fix punctuation so it matches the flow, as well as word choice maybe. Its close but not 100% but you getting there
Thnx for that I will use the advice on future poems

ILoveMyBoyfriend:

I LOVE it!!

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