A short poem to someone i love dearly written by yours truly...i hope you enjoy...i would love honest feedback
Without him i start hurting to stay
He makes my pain fade away
But one day i know he’s gonna leave
And that day i may no longer breathe
With his hand on my heart
I hope we do not part
I fell so hard
With 10 hearts on the card
My hearts skipped a beat
When he catches me before the ground and i meet
He’s my dime
He makes my world shine
I hope he knows
Even though it might not show
Oh, i love him so

Question

A short poem to someone i love dearly written by yours truly...i hope you enjoy...i would love honest feedback
Without him i start hurting to stay 
He makes my pain fade away
But one day i know he’s gonna leave
And that day i may no longer breathe
With his hand on my heart
I hope we do not part
I fell so hard
With 10 hearts on the card
My hearts skipped a beat
When he catches me before the ground and i meet
He’s my dime
He makes my world shine
I hope he knows
Even though it might not show
Oh, i love him so

Toveron9666 · Answer

Beautiful

Victorya · Answer

@toveron9666 wrote:

Beautiful

tysm

imtohotforyouanyway · Answer

OMG THIS IS SO NICE you shoudl write more

Victorya · Answer

@imtohotforyouanyway wrote:

OMG THIS IS SO NICE you shoudl write more

tysm

Backstabber · Answer

pretty good

JoshSimmons999 · Answer

You did good, heh, you did good

Victorya · Answer

@backstabber wrote:

pretty good

ty

Victorya · Answer

@joshsimmons999 wrote:

You did good, heh, you did good

thanks

JoshSimmons999 · Answer

@Victorya your welcome

Victorya · Answer

@joshsimmons999 wrote:

@Victorya your welcome

🫶🏾

JoshSimmons999 · Answer

@Victorya 😌

ItzDanger · Answer

This is amazing. Keep up the great work

Victorya · Answer

@itzdanger wrote:

This is amazing. Keep up the great work

tysm

ItzDanger · Answer

@victorya wrote:

@itzdanger wrote:

This is amazing. Keep up the great work

tysm

Ofc<3

Fortish · Answer

sick, keep it up!

Victorya · Answer

@fortish wrote:

sick, keep it up!

thanks