Question

SoOoOoOoooo Last night I put together this song I wrote its title is "Nighttime Lover"
"FREEE OF JUDGMENT AND OPEN FOR SUGGESTION"
be honest I wanna know if yall like it or not!!!


I'm not even gunna ask why
Not that your gunna tell
You're not taking my message
Am I supposed to be scared?
Because its been so clear to me
Im not one of your exes
Could that be the reason
me and you aint textin

Or am I just a nighttime lover
2nd best layin in your covers
Taking shots but were taking doubles
Help relieving all your troubles
Im just waiting for you to text back
Now tell me baby could you please do that
You said you loved but you took that back
So tell me baby whyed you take it back

Because I know when you touch her
you cant help but too think about me
And I know when you kiss her
it feels like your kissing me
and I know when your with her
you wish you were here with me
And I know when you love her
you think about how you loved me

Or am I just a nighttime lover
2nd best layin in your covers
taking shots but were taking doubles
help relieving all your troubles
Im just waiting for you to text back
Now tell me baby could you please do that
you said you loved but you took that back
so tell me baby whyed you take it back

so tell me baby whyed you take it back

so tell me baby whyed you take it back-

Answer 1

Well done! Very nice and I like it a lot.

Answer 2

it's good

Answer 3

keep up the hard work