Question

Here is part two to bloody tears I don’t have a title but once again thank you qcb for the title name and to others for being here and listening and I’m sorry for any troubles I have caused💞


To be trapped in a life
Thats full of hurt
Trapped In a world
That hates me
The vines reach out
To suffercate me
In my own blood
But I still linger
In hurt and confusion
No one sees the blood tears
That come out of my painful
Hurtful bloody eyes
My body tortured
Repeatedly
My heart crumbles
Like a million pieces
That's scattered all over
What the point
In life when
all you feel
is suffering

Answer 1

Let me know your thoughts.

Answer 2

you did an amazing job, but you didnt really cause anything. Good job nas 💞

Answer 3

yup 💞

Answer 4

😭 its so good but the emotion in ittttt

Answer 5

u did a good job it made me cry

Answer 6

how do you do so good writing 😢

Answer 7

GG lad it was cool

Answer 8

well your goood at writtin

Answer 9

My dad as well did poetry and I used to watch him alot

Answer 10

awsome

Answer 11

u really let yur emotion out

Answer 12

You think this would be good for people to tell their gf?

Answer 13

i bet you can become a poet in real life cause u bring out your emotions and tht sumthin nobody can do

Answer 14

agreed

Answer 15

i agree with her you could make several poems you already have one

Answer 16

or u could post it on a web page and see what people really say abt

Answer 17

i mean coming from my heart and all i think u could put people back into there place even if they had hard times

Answer 18

ong and u should do more cause well u see how many people responded to your stuff

Answer 19

I appreciate you all.

Answer 20

no we appreciate u for tellin us yur emotions

Answer 21

Yeah, thank you again ✨gurl✨ 😂

Answer 22

Part 3?

Answer 23

yes most definitely

Answer 24

I hope your luck changes for better Nas ; )

Answer 25

U can make both part 1 and 2 into a story now or poem

Answer 26

Never thought of that

Answer 27

Perhaps I will

Answer 28

Broski this is fire. Keep yo head held up high and neva bow down low 4 nobody. This is amazing, and i'm proud of you g. Live yo dreams and neva let nobody make them jus fantasies. Like we fam so if u ever needa vent abt sum, hit my line

Answer 29

Same go for you as well we ride and die no homo that weak stuff we stompin on it live yo dreams as well dont let nobody tell you different whatever is in yo grasp grab it and yeah g you might fall but its abt da ppl around u who will bring you up an b dere foe u

Answer 30

this is fire bro

Answer 31

Good looks*

Answer 32

Dropping part 3 now

Answer 33

bet