heres a song i wrote

No fairy tales or tragic endings
No more dreams or friendships
Only what u feels convenient

You Left me in the dark all alone
Another puppet you could control
Wrapped in lies and my feelings

Mess with my life likes it your job
Using me until my head pops
I should’ve told you to get lost
Now i’m drinking my own regret
You can lock me in cage
Or throw me off a clif
You can leave for the sharks
Or let the fire eat my skin
But nothing burns just like this
I can only wish
I can only wish

You make me wanna crawl into a cave
Sit alone, in the dark, rot alone
Waiting for a bear to make its claim

Your like smoking that i gotta quit
You really hit leave me pitched
Killing me inside slowly

Mess with my life likes it your job
Using me until my head pops
I should’ve told you to get lost
Now i’m drinking my own regret
You can lock me in cage
Or throw me off a clif
You can leave for the sharks
Or let the fire eat my skin
But nothing burns just like this
I can only wish
I can only wish

No peace or fun
Can’t even run
Wish we were done
Want to live long
but-

You can mess with my life likes it your job
You can use me until my head pops
Because i can’t let go of this
Something takes me back
I can only wish
I can only wish

Question

heres a song i wrote

No fairy tales or tragic endings 
No more dreams or friendships
Only what u feels convenient

You Left me in the dark all alone
Another puppet you could control
Wrapped in lies and my feelings

Mess with my life likes it your job
Using me until my head pops
I should’ve told you to get lost
Now i’m drinking my own regret
You can lock me in cage
Or throw me off a clif 
You can leave for the sharks
Or let the fire eat my skin
But nothing burns just like this
I can only wish
I can only wish

You make me wanna crawl into a cave
Sit alone, in the dark, rot alone
Waiting for a bear to make its claim

Your like smoking that i gotta quit 
You really hit leave me pitched 
Killing me inside slowly

Mess with my life likes it your job
Using me until my head pops
I should’ve told you to get lost
Now i’m drinking my own regret
You can lock me in cage
Or throw me off a clif 
You can leave for the sharks
Or let the fire eat my skin
But nothing burns just like this
I can only wish
I can only wish

No peace or fun
Can’t even run
Wish we were done 
Want to live long
but-

You can mess with my life likes it your job
You can use me until my head pops
Because i can’t let go of this
Something takes me back
I can only wish
I can only wish

kaleighh533 · Answer

very nice keep up the good work max (: 10\10

kai6665 · Answer

good job 😩 should be on spotify ngl

MaxTon · Answer

nah its suck xd

MaxTon · Answer

i wrote it in 
5 min so

kaleighh533 · Answer

@maxton wrote:

nah its suck xd

shush no it doesnt

MaxTon · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@maxton wrote:

nah its suck xd

shush no it doesnt

ok fine

MaxTon · Answer

@kai6665 wrote:

good job 😩 should be on spotify ngl

ikr

kai6665 · Answer

lmao

kaleighh533 · Answer

have u thought of a title e.e

forgetmylife · Answer

It’s a good song keep at it g I’ll always be here to support you.

ghettogurl21 · Answer

honestly this song is very gooood it makes people think there in the wilderness

kenley102 · Answer

Omll its so goodd!!

ItzDanger · Answer

Bru this is amazing. Keep making songs and keep getting better. Shoot for the stars and aim for the moon. Don't let nobody make you feel like you can't be great. Your amazing.-danger

Fortish · Answer

wow amazing! keep it up max!

sammy1818 · Answer

it was very good

babygirlXOXO · Answer

I love it, it's really good 😁👍👍💖💖

gilromer017 · Answer

amazing. I couldnt do it if I took a year to try. :)👍

loverkasy · Answer

Lovely job c;