Heres another song i wrote in five mins any feed back would be ncie and help

Look im just really tired and i’m bored as hell
I’m angry and aggressive so just screw off
I don’t need another lesson or a new pep talk
Try to put me to bed i’ll rip your head off

I couldn't less if you feel depressed
Popping pills on the daily just to impress
Drinking cause you told me it helps with the stress
Your so annoying let me leave all of this

Cause i don't really care bout you no more
All you little games and messed up sports
Lies in my head wanna make get hurt
Your so stupid make me feel useless yeah

All these random hookups
Living life like screw ups
Reliving all your past fight
Calling me at mid nights
Herd you got back with your ex
Now you wanna leave him
Owe everyone money
But you keep making dept
All these problems u keep making
I’m just done with all of them

Cause i don't really care bout you no more
All you little games and messed up sports
Lies in my head wanna make get hurt
Your so stupid make me feel useless yeah

But your my only type even when we're drunk (yeah)
Living on a thread trying so hard not to give in
You know all of my demons watched me commit every sin
I know i can’t let go of this

Break up just fake love
Your gone and i need some
It’s hard but all it's gone
Want more but i can’t talk

(it's all gone for you)

( it’s not something new)

Question

Heres another song i wrote in five mins any feed back would be ncie and help

Look im just really tired and i’m bored as hell
I’m angry and aggressive so just screw off
I don’t need another lesson or a new pep talk
Try to put me to bed i’ll rip your head off

I couldn't less if you feel depressed
Popping pills on the daily just to impress
Drinking cause you told me it helps with the stress
Your so annoying let me leave all of this

Cause i don't really care bout you no more
All you little games and messed up sports
Lies in my head wanna make get hurt
Your so stupid make me feel useless yeah

All these random hookups
Living life like screw ups
Reliving all your past fight
Calling me at mid nights
Herd you got back with your ex
Now you wanna leave him
Owe everyone money 
But you keep making dept 
All these problems u keep making 
I’m just done with all of them

Cause i don't really care bout you no more
All you little games and messed up sports
Lies in my head wanna make get hurt
Your so stupid make me feel useless yeah

But your my only type even when we're drunk (yeah)
Living on a thread trying so hard not to give in
You know all of my demons watched me commit every sin
I know i can’t let go of this

Break up just fake love
Your gone and i need some
It’s hard but all it's gone 
Want more but i can’t talk

(it's all gone for you)

( it’s not something new)

forgetmylife · Answer

Max this is hella good negl especially this part “ I couldn't less if you feel depressed
Popping pills on the daily just to impress
Drinking cause you told me it helps with the stress” it hit to the core keep at it don’t stop g🖤

MaxTon · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

Max this is hella good negl especially this part “ I couldn't less if you feel depressed Popping pills on the daily just to impress Drinking cause you told me it helps with the stress” it hit to the core keep at it don’t stop g🖤

thank you

forgetmylife · Answer

@maxton wrote:

@forgetmylife wrote:

Max this is hella good negl especially this part “ I couldn't less if you feel depressed Popping pills on the daily just to impress Drinking cause you told me it helps with the stress” it hit to the core keep at it don’t stop g🖤

thank you

No problem

kaleighh533 · Answer

max you spelt nice wrong butttt i loved it keep up the good work bcs its beautifullll so 10\10 (:

MaxTon · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

max you spelt nice wrong butttt i loved it keep up the good work bcs its beautifullll so 10\10 (:

i'll spell you wrong lol

kaleighh533 · Answer

@maxton wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

max you spelt nice wrong butttt i loved it keep up the good work bcs its beautifullll so 10\10 (:

i'll spell you wrong lol

lol so do it (:

MaxTon · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@maxton wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

max you spelt nice wrong butttt i loved it keep up the good work bcs its beautifullll so 10\10 (:

i'll spell you wrong lol

lol so do it (:

bet oyu

kaleighh533 · Answer

@maxton wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@maxton wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

max you spelt nice wrong butttt i loved it keep up the good work bcs its beautifullll so 10\10 (:

i'll spell you wrong lol

lol so do it (:

bet oyu

so smart lemme give u a cookie 🍪

forgetmylife · Answer

Kale finna have to tap out

Alhamdulilliah · Answer

Max this is impressive! It's crazy on the amount you wrote in just 5 mins. Keep up the amazing work on creating wonderful music!!! I see you becoming an amazing singer in the future!