Question

alright so ive added a bit more to my sink version im still working on it but give feedback so here it is :sinking to the bottom of the labyrinth im in so much pain battered and bruised tails,knuckles where are they im so alone stuck at the bottom with no air bubbles around looking around but i dont see anybody did they leave me here all on purpose i dont get it what did i do drowing drowning im now drowning and am running out of time to escape how much time has passed since i jumped in the labyrinth zone to save my friends im so sorry my friends just to slow i was to slow to escape this watery hell and help you out all my friends and robotnik ill kill you if i ever escape but here i am stuck at the bottom i fear ill never escape from this place but was it sorrow that made me so alone tried everything to break free but nothings work gotta keep on trying to break it so that i can breath freely once again but im so weak right now and now that sorrow has set in i dont think i can escape from here green hills what will it be now but here we go again so ill be the one to save my life cant waste anymore time but looking around i dont see anything to help ive got a problem what to do gotta think and fast what would tails do but now im so weak i cant do anything anymore

Answer 1

This is actually good, it’s like I can visualize what you are saying. Good job! Keep it up!

Answer 2

Its very good and you can tell you've added emotion into this when you read it its like you can not only feel it but like nas said you can visualize it so keep up the good work I hope to see more from you (: 10\10

Answer 3

This had me in my feelings ngl. Good job. I felt everything u said and i would like to hear more from u. Keep it up

Answer 4

Good Job!