Part 5
Doesn’t have a title

In a never ending battle for life,
No one seems to know how I feel,
Lost and all alone and on my own,
No one hears my screams or cries,
No one sees the tears that run down my face,
No one heard my sorrow,
No one ever knows if I'm hurting or not,
My sorrows hidden behind my mask I put on,
No one sees the real me,
No ones stops me and said tell me the truth,
When I act like everything is fine,
When it's not,
My life is full of darkness and sorrow,
No on sees the pain in my eyes.

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Part 5 
Doesn’t have a title

In a never ending battle for life,
No one seems to know how I feel,
Lost and all alone and on my own,
No one hears my screams or cries,
No one sees the tears that run down my face,
No one heard my sorrow,
No one ever knows if I'm hurting or not,
My sorrows hidden behind my mask I put on,
No one sees the real me,
No ones stops me and said tell me the truth,
When I act like everything is fine,
When it's not,
My life is full of darkness and sorrow,
No on sees the pain in my eyes.

forgetmylife · Answer

Let me know your thoughts.

curb · Answer

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forgetmylife · Answer

@curb wrote:

Ok, thank you.

curb · Answer

Customer satisfaction is my goal

forgetmylife · Answer

@curb wrote:

Customer satisfaction is my goal

Fosho

kai6665 · Answer

good job nas- my fav one so far 💞

curb · Answer

Damn which garbage bin should this poem go into 🤔

kai6665 · Answer

Curb be quiet

forgetmylife · Answer

@kai6665 wrote:

good job nas- my fav one so far 💞

Thank you liliz

kai6665 · Answer

welcome nas 💞

curb · Answer

@kai6665 wrote:

Curb be quiet

My bad

kai6665 · Answer

mhm
it sure is

curb · Answer

@kai6665 wrote:

mhm it sure is

This comment made my day

kai6665 · Answer

good to hear! 💞

curb · Answer

Your kind gestures are substantially appreciated kai 🫡

forgetmylife · Answer

Bruh

kai6665 · Answer

*Lili get it right buddy

curb · Answer

Lili* forgive me

kai6665 · Answer

Forgiven.

curb · Answer

Thank you master

kai6665 · Answer

Mhm, welcome lmao

Fortish · Answer

Amazing nas, keep it up!

Sailor · Answer

Nice job Nas!<3

kristen00001 · Answer

i love all ur writing nas <3

forgetmylife · Answer

@sailor wrote:

Nice job Nas!<3

Thank you sailor💞

forgetmylife · Answer

@kristen00001 wrote:

i love all ur writing nas <3

Thank you kris💞

ghettogurl21 · Answer

do no one for the title

forgetmylife · Answer

@ghettogurl21 wrote:

do no one for the title

Fosho ma💞

kaleighh533 · Answer

@curb wrote:

Damn which garbage bin should this poem go into 🤔

were here to give people are opinions on how good their work is or how they can improve it. Not to bring their self-esteem down so if you don't have anything nice to say please don't say it at all (:

kaleighh533 · Answer

Nas you needa make a book or some outta all your poems your making this is yo 5th poem keep at itttttt 10/10

forgetmylife · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@curb wrote:

Damn which garbage bin should this poem go into 🤔

were here to give people are opinions on how good their work is or how they can improve it. Not to bring their self-esteem down so if you don't have anything nice to say please don't say it at all (:

True.

forgetmylife · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

Nas you needa make a book or some outta all your poems your making this is yo 5th poem keep at itttttt 10/10

Bet bae kale💞 I lowkey thought about it negl

kaleighh533 · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

Nas you needa make a book or some outta all your poems your making this is yo 5th poem keep at itttttt 10/10

Bet bae kale💞 I lowkey thought about it negl

yes do so

forgetmylife · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@forgetmylife wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

Nas you needa make a book or some outta all your poems your making this is yo 5th poem keep at itttttt 10/10

Bet bae kale💞 I lowkey thought about it negl

yes do so

Bet

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