Question

heres the finished version so here it is tell what yall think sinking to the bottom of the labyrinth im in so much pain battered and bruised tails knuckles where are you im so alone stuck at the bottom with no air bubbles looking all around but i dont see anybody did they just leave me here on purpose i dont get it drowning drowning im now drowning and am running out of time to escape how much time has passed since the day i jumped into the labyrinth zone goodbye my friends im so sorry my friends was just to slow i was to slow to escape this watery hell and help you out all of my friends and robotnik ill kill you when i get back to the surface but here i am stuck at the bottom i fear ill never escape from here but was it sorrow that made me so alone tried everything to break free but nothings worked otta keep on trying to break it so that i can breath freely once again but im so weak right now and now that sorrow has kicked in i can escape anymore green hills what will it be now but here we go again so ill be the one to save my own life cant waste anymore time but looking around i dont see anything that to help ive got a problem what to do gotta think and fast what would tails do but im so weak i cant do anything anymore maybe ill stay here no i promised my friends id help save them but with air running low i dont think ill make it but now im fading out finally death will set me free ......tricked by my own mind and still stuck in the labyrinth tried everything but it still wont break and now that air is running low ill die once again but why must it be this way since im gonna be drowing drowning im now drowning in the depths of the labyrinth how much time have i sufered here in the depths of this hell i dont know but i wanna live a little longer someone save me before its to late drowing in the lost labyrinth zone

Answer 1

Sick, keep it up!

Answer 2

bravo

Answer 3

I love the wording its a great flow keep up the good work

Answer 4

@joseph122

Answer 5

Well done man, keep it up

Answer 6

Good Job!