Question

So I started writing a story. Lmk whatchu think. "A FUTURE HAS" PART ONE.
"The floor is red covered in blood
No not enough, one more cut
Slashes my arm and smiles
Yes thats better I'm dying now
My friend called me 30 minutes ago
She wants to meet at the mall at 3
I told her i would be there
Smiles to myself. I'm a failure ain't I?
My visions getting blurry i can barely see
I'm starting to hallucinate.nana is that you?
She gets closer to me and says something
I can barely hear what she says
But i understand what it is
She wants me to get up
She wants me to fight
She stands there and holds out a hand
I look at her and she just smiles
She says come on bayani I got you
I start crying and take her hand



Nana i'm too weak for life
I dont deserve to live
She looks at me and frowns
Bayani people rely on you
You have to be strong for them
I cant stop the tears as she says this
Bayani you need to be there to guide them out of the dark and into the light
Its not always easy but u have to be strong.
I look up and sniffles
Nana I miss you.
She smiles again and hugs me
I know bayani. You pray to me everynight
And i answer them. How do you think u have that luck?
I look at her and just start sobbing
I wish you could've been here to watch me grow up nana....to be continued

Answer 1

wow this is deep...

Answer 2

good job

Answer 3

keep doing what u do best B)

Answer 4

Damn bro, this hits deep. Keep it up Dangy!