most kid say their gonna die in the trenches, now that im felon once i see the opps i gotta pull out these switches, once ur choppas spray they start hoppin the fences, then they'll pull a 6ix9ine and hang with the snitches

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link1234 · Answer

hows this rap

Astrid1 · Answer

It's decent, typical though. But there's room for improvement. Your verses are nice and all, but the rhyming scheme is close. I like it though.

Astrid1 · Answer

Your ending of each verse, rhymes a slight bit, enough to be a typical rap song.

link1234 · Answer

thx bro bro