Question

How is my poem? Honest Feedback.

Answer 1

To Kayla

You give me butterflies everyday

Scattered thoughts racing through my head

You make me crazy the way you smile

I fall head first when you laugh



I'm falling for you



I see our futures together

Living, breathing, loving each other day by day

I would never leave you if I knew i could make the future

with you permanent

I will be your friend, partner and wife

for always and forever



I'm falling for you

Answer 2

its really good, i love it. great job! keep it up

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

Nice poem

Answer 5

wow this is really sweet and amazing good job!!