Question

ok ok so i changed the begging of my story

Answer 1

i would like some feedback there will be spelling and grammar mistakes

Answer 2

There was once a young couple that were madly in love soulmates you could say but their love was considered a heinous forbidden love so to hide from the unforgiving townfolk they ventured out into the thick woods they kept running until they found a clearing in the woods but something was wrong, There was a small wooden play house in the middle of it they looked at each other and Draugr said,“ come one mi Amor lets go in that'll be a good place to hide!”

Answer 3

happy now