Question

A short story by me
No Skills
What skills did she have? None. Interests? A few. Was she good at them? Not really. People with skills and talents surrounded her. But she, the talentless freak, stood far off in the corner. Every person she knew or was related to could do something. She couldn't kick a ball. She sounded like a dying bird when she sang. She failed any educational........anything. She could not run. She could not even clean a dish correctly. Animals hated her. She could not swim. She burned or overcooked food. She sucked at makeup. And don't even ask her to paint a nail. Children ignored her. She fell when she danced. And don't ask her to take care of you. She could sort of grow a plant. How was that useful? She kind of drew okay. What was her talent? Her skill? That thing that made her herself? NOTHING! She had no skill. No talent. No Extra weird cool thing about her.

Answer 1

Ok, so what is the purpose of the story? Is it just about some person basically saying some girl is meaningless? If so, I'd find that boring. Also, sentences don't start with "and", so fix that. Is this like the first chapter? I don't really see the point or meaning of the story.

Answer 2

😳 it was a short story....for a blog about my life. Sorry.

Answer 3

Well, maybe instead of saying how worthless you are *referencing in the story*, maybe talk about yourself if it's about your life. Rather than telling you cant do anything, say your talents, something extraordinary or bad that happened that affected your life, and so and so.

Answer 4

That's not the point of the blog.............................

Answer 5

NVM