Give me feedback on my poem please.

Title: For my adorable owl

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Your dimple is adorable
and so are you

Orchids are white
Ghost ones are rare
My life is short and so is your hair

Magnolia grows
with buds like eggs
My hand is tanned
and so are your legs

Sunflowers reach
up to the skies
The stars are kind
and so are your eyes

Foxgloves in hedges
Surround the farms
hides are tanned
and so are your arms

Daisies are pretty
Daffies have style
my day is warm
and so is your smile

A owl is beautiful,
Just like you.

Question

Give me feedback on my poem please.

Title: For my adorable owl

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Your dimple is adorable 
and so are you

Orchids are white
Ghost ones are rare
My life is short and so is your hair

Magnolia grows
with buds like eggs
My hand is tanned 
and so are your legs

Sunflowers reach
up to the skies
The stars are kind
and so are your eyes

Foxgloves in hedges 
Surround the farms
hides are tanned
and so are your arms

Daisies are pretty
Daffies have style
my day is warm
and so is your smile

A owl is beautiful,
Just like you.

NLEChoppa25 · Answer

very nice poem ur very good u shud make more

Olive2006 · Answer

@nlechoppa25 wrote:

very nice poem ur very good u shud make more

thank you

Lura · Answer

Indeed. Keep up the good work!

NLEChoppa25 · Answer

@olive2006 wrote:

@nlechoppa25 wrote:

very nice poem ur very good u shud make more

thank you

yw

bunnyishere · Answer

very good poem- i suck at making them so you're in good shape :)