wrote this. tell me what you think I guess.

I'm just tryna get over you, I don't know what im gonna do, this relationship is over due, I've closed my mind solitude, you seem so nice but you're always rude, I didn't do anything lose the tude, it's always back and forth nothing new, it's supposed to be us "Stuck Like Glue".

You're picture perfect self absorbed, I feel so worthless nothing more, I'm always hurting perfect storm, in my mind's a constant war.

That's why I'm crunching all these syllables, everything i do is unpredictable, I've tried but I'm unkillable, everything you've done is unforgivable, I was really hoping for a miracle, just something that's not cynicle, I'm so empty my heart's unfillable, this life is so unfulfillable.

Im tryna rewrite the ending, I really wish that you could stay, but the entire time you were kidding, you never loved me anyways, all of this time that I was spending, you let it go to waste, then you left the city, you were gone without a trace, I hate that you're so pretty, it's hard to say it to your face, I'm thinking about leaving, I gotta move away from this place.

(Break)

Everyone's deplorable, trust me love is horrible, It's so unsupportable, my heart is unrestorable, I hate it cause your adorable, don't answer it's rhetorical, I already knew like an Oracle, I wish your love was affordable.

She has me In her hold, she has me in her grasp, her games are getting old, but I always come running back, I can feel it in my soul, my heart is turning black, I just wish she would know, I hoped that it would last.

I have so many demons, I make so many mistakes, everyone just leaves me, I miss seeing your face, everyone chose treason, I need to find an escape, but my mind is defeated, I don't have a place.

I'm stuck in this world, I'm nothing but an outcast, everyone comes and goes, they finna give me whiplash, I'm tired of being alone, I'm tired of being backstabbed, it's all getting old, I'm about to make this my last.

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wrote this. tell me what you think I guess.

I'm just tryna get over you, I don't know what im gonna do, this relationship is over due, I've closed my mind solitude, you seem so nice but you're always rude, I didn't do anything lose the tude, it's always back and forth nothing new, it's supposed to be us "Stuck Like Glue".

You're picture perfect self absorbed, I feel so worthless nothing more, I'm always hurting perfect storm, in my mind's a constant war.

That's why I'm crunching all these syllables, everything i do is unpredictable, I've tried but I'm unkillable, everything you've done is unforgivable, I was really hoping for a miracle, just something that's not cynicle, I'm so empty my heart's unfillable, this life is so unfulfillable.

Im tryna rewrite the ending, I really wish that you could stay, but the entire time you were kidding, you never loved me anyways, all of this time that I was spending, you let it go to waste, then you left the city, you were gone without a trace, I hate that you're so pretty, it's hard to say it to your face, I'm thinking about leaving, I gotta move away from this place.

(Break)

Everyone's deplorable, trust me love is horrible, It's so unsupportable, my heart is unrestorable, I hate it cause your adorable, don't answer it's rhetorical, I already knew like an Oracle, I wish your love was affordable.

She has me In her hold, she has me in her grasp, her games are getting old, but I always come running back, I can feel it in my soul, my heart is turning black, I just wish she would know, I hoped that it would last.

I have so many demons, I make so many mistakes, everyone just leaves me, I miss seeing your face, everyone chose treason, I need to find an escape, but my mind is defeated, I don't have a place.

I'm stuck in this world, I'm nothing but an outcast, everyone comes and goes, they finna give me whiplash, I'm tired of being alone, I'm tired of being backstabbed, it's all getting old, I'm about to make this my last.

Bubbleshimmer15 · Answer

It's Intresting...But It's Great

cynthiaclark · Answer

@bubbleshimmer15 wrote:

It's Intresting...But It's Great

whats interesting supposed to mean

Bubbleshimmer15 · Answer

Meaning It Grabbed My Attention and it's Gripping

cynthiaclark · Answer

ok

BarbieJoo · Answer

I love how there is so much emotion in this, like i cant exactly explain but reading this was really intresting and how the rhyming actually made sense in your story lol this was a cool poem you mad, I hope you make more by the way

prettygirl09 · Answer

I love it sis very emotional and it's just amazing good job 😊

yabbyliyah123 · Answer

THAT WAS....... the most beautiful thin ive ever heard

iwantarveal · Answer

that was honestly good and i love how u added nvm it was good

JaydenL · Answer

@bubbleshimmer15 wrote:

It's Intresting...But It's Great

i am with him it is great

suger · Answer

vedy nice

cynthiaclark · Answer

@barbiejoo wrote:

I love how there is so much emotion in this, like i cant exactly explain but reading this was really intresting and how the rhyming actually made sense in your story lol this was a cool poem you mad, I hope you make more by the way

its a song not a poem but thank u

cynthiaclark · Answer

@suger wrote:

vedy nice

thank you

cynthiaclark · Answer

@jaydenl wrote:

@bubbleshimmer15 wrote:

It's Intresting...But It's Great

i am with him it is great

thank u gng

cynthiaclark · Answer

@iwantarveal wrote:

that was honestly good and i love how u added nvm it was good

added what?

cynthiaclark · Answer

@yabbyliyah123 wrote:

THAT WAS....... the most beautiful thin ive ever heard

thank u sm. means alot

cynthiaclark · Answer

@prettygirl09 wrote:

I love it sis very emotional and it's just amazing good job 😊

thank u sissy