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dgreer4:

Hey guys.. I um. Recently wrote this. It's a motivational piece and just want to know what you guys think... "Time To Change" By Destiny Greer `This world is just screwed up though to be honest. If there was more love and less hatred, the world would be a better place. Maybe we’re here to be that change I guess. Change that this world needs but doesn’t realize just how much it needs it. Change that will finally put a stop to all this violence, fear, and racial judgment, or just being judged overall… People want to feel like they are wanted, matter, and are enough for everyone no matter who they are, the color of their skin, or what they believe in. We are all important. No matter what. Who and what matters shouldn’t have to be classified because we are A:LL people. But that’s what’s happening everywhere in the world. When will people realize Enough is Enough? What happened to “Love your neighbor as yourself?” Is that word of advice being ignored now? Sometimes it gets hard trying to make a difference. Trying to get people to see the world from all perspectives and not just one. We are supposed to love one another. Not hate and discriminate against everyone. Every person is fighting their own battles. They need to know that they are not alone, that someone understands. Someone cares. I wish people would understand. It’s time to change. And be that change.'

Rylee88:

It's very good, many people can learn from this. (Especially on this site lol) Excellent job, Bravo. c:

Rylee88:

There's only one mistake. "A:LL people." It would be "ALL people."

dgreer4:

@Rylee68 yes, I see that now. Thank you for the feedback tho!

Rylee88:

You're Welcome.

dgreer4:

:)

XlilxbwadX:

Damm I love it, such amazing words from such a perfect lady :)

dgreer4:

@xlilxbwadx wrote:
Damm I love it, such amazing words from such a perfect lady :)
:) <3

Nilae:

I love it! you're a great writer.

Alhamdulilliah:

This is amazing! Hopefully people will change in a good way. Amazing job, I'm proud of you I love this! Keep it up!

dgreer4:

@alhamdulilliah wrote:
This is amazing! Hopefully people will change in a good way. Amazing job, I'm proud of you I love this! Keep it up!
Thank you so much! I’m literally crying! It means a lot to me! @Alhamdulilliah And thank you! The world needs to hear this! Everyone does! Thank you!

Alhamdulilliah:

You're most welcome, that message made me smile! (:

XlilxbwadX:

The world does need to change, people need to change, if i could i would also write my words to show the world, but i cant ;-; #sadtimes lol

hottiee:

nice

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