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hey i posted my story on here about a week ago, so i'm giving you guys a update on my horror story

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here is the updated version

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Damn, keep going. I'm way over hooked.

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I love it, this deserves more parts

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yayyyyy ^^

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This is amazing, this is wonderful! I absolutely love it! Keep on writing! Never stop this can get published one day with your name. Keep up the good work never stop! :) You truly have a talent for writing.

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I love itttt omg

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you guys are too nice TwT
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This is brilliant writing! Do you have plans to become a author in the future?

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You know what Yuk1, you inspired me, I should post my poems and writing ideas! :) Maybe one day we can collab

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That's perfectly ok, i like writing horror stories as well

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Do you have discord? So we can talk there bc i only talk here when I'm on school computer lol

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yup i'll dm it to you

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excellent keep going. I'm way over hooked.

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This is great keep going in hooked

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thank you all so much

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omgggg i couldn't stop reading!!!! this is amazing... u have an amazing talent!!🫶i love horror movies and books so i give this a huge thumbs up👍

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💜

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This is awesome👍

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gave us a cliffhangeer but all good athours do 😘

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i love it so far

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Murder House
By: yuki
Chapter one: Flash backs

Walking into the kitchen to see a woman covered in bright pink blood being dragged into the basement by papa. I’m confused as to why is papa is dragging ms.Yako into the basement. Should I ask him? Or will he get mad and hurt me again?
papa?
I spoke in my small voice. He looked up at his eldest daughter, but instead of getting mad he… smiled?
papa: now now my dear yukinara there is nothing to worry about.
I was happy. I was always happy when papa wasn’t angry. I smiled back but then he spoke again.
Papa: But if you tell anyone I will kill you… do you understand?
The color drained from my face when I heard that, papa was going to kill me if i told anyone?

Suddenly I jolted up, it was only a dream. god why doesn’t that memory ever leave me? It’s been eleven years since my father murdered ms.Yako and i became his servant. Helping my father with dirty work, dismembering the bodies of the people that he had killed. It used to make me feel sick seeing the bodies but now… I'm not fazed by the dead bodies anymore.

I turned to my nightstand and put my golden colored glasses on. I walked into my bathroom and changed out of my hoodie and put my school uniform on. I didn’t like the skirt. It made me feel like someone I'm not but I can't change it. Father would hurt me again. I walked out of my bathroom into my kitchen to see my twin sister mizumi and my younger brother Ren talking
Ren: i just want to know what happened to her mizu
Mizumi: I understand Ren but I really don’t know. You should ask yuki when he gets here.
I didn’t really hear the conversation as I had just walked in the kitchen. When Mizumi saw me she smiled. I waved good morning
Mizumi: Morning nara!
Yukinara: morning mizu
Ren; morning Yuki. hey uh i have a question
Yukinara: Hmm? Yes ren?
Ren: Do you know what happened to miss yako?
The question startled me. Why the night right after the dream? Why? Why? I stood there frozen for a moment wondering what to say. Do I tell them or not? If i do father will murder me. The thoughts running through my head gave me a bit of a headache. I stummered a answer.
Yukinara: n-no i don’t ren.
Ren: oh… thanks anyways yuki
Yukinara: no problem
I put on a weak smile. I'm glad he bought the lie. The flashes of that night kept flashing in my head. Then it stopped so suddenly it startled me a bit. I noticed that I hadn't gotten the younger kids up yet. I went upstairs to see that only Azumi and Kiyo were up. Sora and Aito were still asleep. I went into Sora's room first, and it turns out he wasn’t asleep, he was just sitting on his bed. when he saw me he jumped into my arms. Sora was always clingy towards me even at the age of twelve. I hugged Sora back as he snuggled into me. I put down and he started laughing, something he usually did after I picked him up. No matter how old Sora got he was always a bit childish and clingy to me.
Yukinara: alright sora you have to get ready for school
Sora: aww can i come with you today big brother?
Yukinara: sorry buddy but highschool is a bit too much for you
Sora: but i’m in middle school now
Sora was always stubborn. He told me he wanted to be with me forever but I knew that would change one day, he wouldn’t want to stay with his big brother his entire life. I left his room to go get aito, he was there laying with the stuffed bunny in his arm. People would bully him for sleeping with a stuffed animal at the age of nine but I always reassured him that it was okay. I sat down on his bed right next to where he was asleep and started to pet his hair. His small green eyes slowly opened as he awoke from his sleep. A smile formed across his face, he sat up and hugged me. I wrapped my arms around him. Aito let go looking at me, I looked back at him. He seemed to understand what I was trying to get him to do, so he sprang up and walked into his closet getting his school clothes. Getting up and walking out of his room I noticed my father standing at the end of the hallway. I tried not looking at him but his presence was a bit nerve wracking. As I walked past him he grabbed my wrist. I looked up at his dark black eye, he was a scary individual.
Father: my dear yukinara how about you come do some work before school, hmm?
I knew what he meant by work when he said that, he wanted me to go dismember the bodies of the people he had just killed.
Yuki: Sorry father but I can't get my uniform messy, it would be a shame if someone found out about this, now wouldn’t it?
I played into my father’s little pretended like what he does isn’t disgusting. My father nodded and let go of my wrist. As I started to walk away I could still feel his eyes on me. Once I got back downstairs I called everyone to get their shoes on since it was time to go. Feet running from the kitchen, living room and stairs were heard as all six kids ran to put their shoes on for school. No matter how old they get, I will always feel like their parents since I practically raised them. Father was only home three days a week, Friday, Saturday, and sunday. Walking out the door, the older kids walked one way and the younger kids walked the other way.

Once we got to school I saw two girls, one with pale white skin and dark purple hair with black highlights, the other with dark skin and lighter purple hair the same shade as mine. Their names were ash and hikari. I walked up to the two of them, they seemed to be talking about something.
Yuki: morning ash and hikari, how are you this morning
Ash: ah good morning yuki, i am well
Hikari: you both don’t show that much emotion do you? I mean come on you two talking alone must be soo boring!
Hikari was always very adamant about having fun so she would complain about me and not show that much emotion. I’m not sure why Ash didn’t show that much emotion but she’s always been that way so I won't question it.
Ash: now now darling no need to be rude this early in the morning
Hikari: i- i’m not ash! God why do you have to use that nickname in public? It's embarrassing.
Ash: it’s simply a way to make sure you don’t cause havoc
Yuki: heh
I chuckled at Ash's comment that hikari and a few others in the group liked to cause chaos for the fun of it. I'm not sure why though I personally have never seen the appeal to causing chaos for no reason. Me and Ash were alway the voice of reason even if I'm busy a lot of the time. The three of us talked for a little bit while we waited for everyone else in the group to school. I jumped as i felt a pair of arms wrapped around my waist, once i heard hikari snickering at me i knew who it was. Turning around to see a good friend of mine named oli. his blue and orange hair normally covered his dark green eyes, but from this angle i could see them. Oli looked down at me and smiled.
Oli: awe look how cute you are wrapped in my arms yuki-chan
Yuki: mhm okay oli
Oli: but your so tiny it’s cute
Yuki: oli- i understand that i’m 4’9 but please let me go.
He laughed at my words and let me go. Taking a second to breath i hear the bell ring. The school was quite big so it took me a minute to get to class. I walked into class and sat next to my best friend lia she was always full of energy even at 8:00 in the morning. Lia was always very pretty almost like a goddess

Time skip to after school.

Oli and I were standing outside the school talking to each other as usual.

Oli: Hey Yuki, I heard there is a new ice cream shop that opened up. So you wanna go with me in a few?
Yuki: Oliver, have you forgotten? I can’t hang out during the week..
Oli: oh right, sorry yuki maybe this weekend?
Yuki: uh yeah maybe
Oli: okay! Well if you can go i’ll pick you up and 7:00pm, on saturday
I softly smiled at his enthusiastic words. Oli’s personality was always a joy to be around. I saw Ren and Mizumi walk out of the school talking to one another. I wrapped my arms around his waist and told him goodbye and started walking over to my two siblings. While walking home I would put my headphones in and listen to the songs I had been working on. It was always a calm walk, the woods that surrounded my house were always very pretty and had a good amount of cute little animals. As we walked into the house I saw Sora standing right at the edge of the stairs, he was already changed out of his school uniform.
Sora: Big brother, your home!
Yuki: hello sora glad to see your home safe
Sora: I'm too big brother, but can we go out and play now?
Yuki: after i get changed out of my uniform
Sora: Yay!
Mizumi: awe nara i’m sensing some favoritism~
Yuki: i- what? No i don’t have favorites among my siblings i’m just being a good older brother.
Mizumi: hm whatever you say nara
I looked at Mizumi unamused with her antics even if they were usual. It didn’t take me long to get changed out of my uniform and into some jeans and a black hoodie I saved for the winter since I hate the cold. Once I was outside in the garden I saw Kiyo attending to her plants in the green house and Sora sitting on the bench waiting for me. His bright red eyes alway lit up when they met with my pastel blue eyes. The way Sora always looked up to me made me happy but it also hurt because of all the secrets I have to keep from him. Sora picked up something from the table, while i looked at him confused he walked up to me and smile
Sora: Okay okay sooo i want you and me to draw together!
Yuki: Sora, I can't draw.
Sora: awe of course you can you just have to put your mind to it
Yuki: um okay fine i’ll draw with you sora
I sat down at the table right next to him while he started to sketch on the piece of paper. I took a look at his paper and realized that he was drawing some type of flower. I'm guessing a lily of some sort, either way it was such a gorgeous drawing. My mind started to space out once the pencil made contact with the paper, all that I could think about was how I was going to tell my siblings about Miss Yako. maybe i don’t have to tell them about father murdering her, maybe it could just be a secret that only father and i know of. I don’t know how long passed before i was snapped back into reality by sora’s laughter, i looked up at sora then back down at my paper and realized i scribbled all over it
Yuki: oh. My apologizes sora i didn’t mean to waste your paper
Sora: don’t worry about it yuki, if you angle it the right way you can make art out of anything!
I pulled my little brother into a tight hug, something he absolutely loved, though the moment was shortened when we heard someone clearing their throat to catch our attention. Father was standing there right at the railing of the gazebo we had in the garden. I stood up and walked over to him, seeing what he wanted from me.
Father: heh oh yukinara. I need to go cook dinner then well you know the rest.
His laugh made me sick. How could he be so sadistic? But i couldn’t deny him so i walked into the house and then walked into the kitchen to help my twin sister. I saw the meat on the counter and immediately felt nauseous. It wasn’t a rare occurrence for father to feed his kids the meat of his victims. Everyone blindlessly ate the meat while I sat there feeling sick to my stomach. They questioned why I didn't eat the meat our father gave us but over time they stopped. Mizumi looked pleased to see me, her smile not fading from her face as she walked to the pantry.
Mizumi: ah yuki good of you to join me
Yuki: mizumi. Your acting like this is some sort of mafia meeting.
Mizumi: what? Oh yuki, your sense of humor is so funny! Anyways~ i need you to take over with dinner
Yuki: Wait, what?
Mizumi: yup because i need to make a dessert of some kind. What do you think? Cake? Cupcakes? Brown-
Yuki: Mizumi, I don’t know if I can handle dinner all by myself.
Mizumi: Aw you got it i mean you have done it before, haven’t you?
Yuki: *sigh* fine i guess you're right mizumi.
Mizumi: yay! Thank you yuki
To be honest I wanted to tell her the reason why it was so hard for me to cook meat that i knew was from humans, but i had to stomach it just so she wouldn’t get suspicious. As i was roaming the kitchen grabbing all the thing i needed for dinner, ren walked into the kitchen with his usual moody face
Ren: hey yuki hey mizumi
Mizumi: Hi Ren!
Yuki: afternoon Ren.
Ren: um yuki you look a bit sick, do you want me to take over?
Yuki: no no i’m good ren
Ren: Are you sure? You look really pale
Yuki: yes Ren i’m fine don’t worry about it
Ren: okay well come get me if you need anything
I nodded, Ren was always that type of person to look scary but is actually one of the nicest people when it comes to his family. It took me about an hour to finish dinner. Though i still felt sick, so i decided to go hang out in the greenhouse for a little bit to clear my mind. The flowers in the greenhouse were always so lovely to be around, and the smell was always very pleasant. My favorite flower has always been calla lilies, they were always so beautiful to me. Breathing in the fresh air, clearing my mind makes all the thoughts go away. The footsteps coming from the side the door is on, I open my eyes to see a certain pink haired little girl named kiyo. She had a watering can in her hands, and I waved at her with a smile on my face.
Yuki: hey yuki i didn’t know you would be in here
Yuki: Hello Kiyo, are you watering your plants?
Kiyo: oh you couldn’t tell?
Yuki: heh you and your sarcasm kiyo
Kiyo: yes yes, now i need to water my plants.
When it started getting colder when autumn came, we had to move a lot of the plants from the garden to the greenhouse. Sadly not all of them could make it, though we got all the ones that could fit and still make it a comfortable place. As I stood up and started to walk out of the greenhouse, my sleeve caught on a rose thorn. I tried to pull on my sleeve but it only ripped it. Once I saw the rip I sighed and walked inside to see azumi so he could fix my sleeve. Once I got to azumi’s room he was sewing a piece of clothing.
Azumi: o-oh hey yuki, do you need something?.
Yuki: Uh yeah i do, the sleeve on my hoodie ripped in the greenhouse and i was wondering if you could fix it?.
Azumi: oh yeah of course i can fix it for you yuki.
I took my hoodie off since I had a long sleeved shirt under my hoodie. I tossed it onto the table then me and azumi walked down stairs for dinner. As I sat down at the table, I saw the meat that was so perfectly disguised for eating.I had already made myself some cheese tacos and set them aside. I won’t lie that I have some skill when it comes to cooking but I'm definitely not the best.
Father: hmm yukinara how come you are eating any of the chicken tacos you made?
Yuki: father. It's because I don't like the taste, nor texture of meat in general.
Why would he ask me that? He knows the reason. It was sickening that he was playing this dumb. I tried to eat quickly so i didn’t have to be around him any longer. As I started to go up the stairs I felt a hand firmly grab my wrist, I looked at his cold black eyes and creepy grin.
Father: now now yukinara you know you have work to do
Yuki: i- i guess i do father…
I sighed as I started to walk into the basement. The smell was so vulgar that it made me feel nauseous. I stepped towards the rotting bodies sprawled across the floor and bloodied. As the saw made contact with one of the bodies arms, i grabbed the arm as to not move it and accidentally cut myself in the process. It took around two hours to dismember and put the bodies in bags. I couldn’t stand being down in the basement anymore with that horrible smell. Once I got to my room I decided to take a shower to get the blood off of my arms and legs. It got colder as the blood soaked clothes came off my body, the wet sound the clothes made as they hit the floor made me gag in disgust. I took a step into the shower the feeling of the hot water hitting my back made me happy since all of my troubles were done for the day. I shut the water off and put on a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. Laying in bed with my wet hair I thought of why father was making me do thor? Or why did he feed his kids the meat of his victims?. I decided not to think about that and to just go to bed since it was already ten at night. Setting my glasses on the nightstand and getting under the cover, sighing in relief as I started to drift off to sleep. I don’t know how long I was asleep but I heard a small scream most likely coming from the basement so I didn't bother going downstairs to look, so I decided to check on it in the morning and go back to sleep for now.

alright everyone chapter one is now officially finished!