Can y'all give me your honest opinion on this poem I wrote a long time ago? Based on a gamily thing that happened.

Flames can be different colors, just like us and other
we all come in different looks
that doesn't mean we get treated like fishing hooks,

Hope you like it! We all have different stories, don't we? We scould respect that.

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Can y'all give me your honest opinion on this poem I wrote a long time ago? Based on a gamily thing that happened.

Flames can be different colors, just like us and other
we all come in different looks 
that doesn't mean we get treated like fishing hooks,

Hope you like it! We all have different stories, don't we? We scould respect that.

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

family* lol i suck at typeing

Rylee88 · Answer

It's good, very short but I prefer to read as little as possible! 
I rate it 10/10 it's sweet but short c:

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

Yes ik its short but that's all I got, lol I'm working on it!

Fanofkenjivtuber · Answer

that poem was.....BEAUTIFUL!
that poem was amazing i hope you right more.
remerber your a shotting STAR

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

@fanofkenjivtuber wrote:

that poem was.....BEAUTIFUL! that poem was amazing i hope you right more. remerber your a shotting STAR

Thank you! And i will write more! ITs one of my good hobbys

Fanofkenjivtuber · Answer

@hawksdaughet8732 wrote:

@fanofkenjivtuber wrote:

that poem was.....BEAUTIFUL! that poem was amazing i hope you right more. remerber your a shotting STAR

Thank you! And i will write more! ITs one of my good hobbys

yw

alphaXtiger · Answer

THTS POEM IS COOL U DID A VERY GOOD JOBBB :)

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

@alphaxtiger wrote:

THTS POEM IS COOL U DID A VERY GOOD JOBBB :)

THANK YOU :)))

vDeku666 · Answer

Nice.Imo,its good,but it wouldnt hurt to add a little more.

XxMimiXx · Answer

I like it ,it's simple and short i rate a 10/10 great job...hope to see more <3

uniqueislove · Answer

100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 IT'S AMAZING I LOVE IT

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

@uniqueislove wrote:

100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 IT'S AMAZING I LOVE IT

Thank you so much! yes ik its short lol

HawksDaughet8732 · Answer

@xxmimixx wrote:

I like it ,it's simple and short i rate a 10/10 great job...hope to see more <3

You will see more! :) Just not right away lol

XxMimiXx · Answer

@hawksdaughet8732 wrote:

@xxmimixx wrote:

I like it ,it's simple and short i rate a 10/10 great job...hope to see more <3

You will see more! :) Just not right away lol

Lol i'll be waiting :)

TotallyNotJay · Answer

That's really good! I love it

Emobrokenss · Answer

its really nice u should make more and more i give it a 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

AriesR0se · Answer

Beautifully written.

theofficialkatie · Answer

it helps you express your feelings which is what poems should do so 10/10 even though it was written awhile ago its still beautifully written and expresses emotion that some people can relate to as well.

mrwhskers · Answer

its really nice! and i like that short

MaxTon · Answer

hehe

danielfootball123 · Answer

gock gock

madz2345 · Answer

10/10

OLIVER69 · Answer

10/5

carry · Answer

10000/10