How's this song?

Black Box
This world revolves around the darkest things in life, and I’m not scared because I’ve got light inside of me that nobody can take away a shine brighter than the sun on the very sunny day and you hurt me a lot, but I’m OK I locked my felling in the black box that’s why I’m gonna say black box black box black box oh yeah
I know that probably sounds depressing but honestly, it’s a great blessing when I lock those feelings away, they only come back on rainy days and even then, I’m alright ain’t gonna put up a big fight I ain’t got time for you just like you ain’t got time for me so I’m walking out see you on the other side of the black box black box black box oh oh ohh
You asked me if in this black box are the feelings, I had for you that I locked them away and there so deep inside so that nobody can find them, but I know they’re there just won’t acknowledge that they are real or how I really feel

Black box black box black box that’s all that’s left of what we had is a black box I took all these feelings away because I don’t wanna have to go back and think about the days when we were together and I’m happier now and I hope you will be too I’m moving on maybe a little too soon, but I got to move on eventually and that’s what you gotta do so say with me

So last time I’ll say black box black box black box he may want me back, but you can’t get me back after my feelings have been locked up in the black box forever, they’re locked up and gone I’m sorry black box

Question

How's this song?

Black Box
This world revolves around the darkest things in life, and I’m not scared because I’ve got light inside of me that nobody can take away a shine brighter than the sun on the very sunny day and you hurt me a lot, but I’m OK I locked my felling in the black box that’s why I’m gonna say black box black box black box oh yeah
I know that probably sounds depressing but honestly, it’s a great blessing when I lock those feelings away, they only come back on rainy days and even then, I’m alright ain’t gonna put up a big fight I ain’t got time for you just like you ain’t got time for me so I’m walking out see you on the other side of the black box black box black box oh oh ohh
You asked me if in this black box are the feelings, I had for you that I locked them away and there so deep inside so that nobody can find them, but I know they’re there just won’t acknowledge that they are real or how I really feel

Black box black box black box that’s all that’s left of what we had is a black box I took all these feelings away because I don’t wanna have to go back and think about the days when we were together and I’m happier now and I hope you will be too I’m moving on maybe a little too soon, but I got to move on eventually and that’s what you gotta do so say with me

So last time I’ll say black box black box black box he may want me back, but you can’t get me back after my feelings have been locked up in the black box forever, they’re locked up and gone I’m sorry black box

Alexis1415 · Answer

It's good c: good job!

Bellad471 · Answer

Thank you <3

theofficialkatie · Answer

cool ngl

Bellad471 · Answer

@theofficialkatie wrote:

cool ngl

thx so much

Alhamdulilliah · Answer

Woah! This is wonderful, it's such an amazing song. I keep on reading it over and over again! Keep up the wonderful work with your songs!

Bellad471 · Answer

@alhamdulilliah wrote:

Woah! This is wonderful, it's such an amazing song. I keep on reading it over and over again! Keep up the wonderful work with your songs!

thank you

Alhamdulilliah · Answer

You’re most welcome, have an amazing day! 😊

Bellad471 · Answer

@alhamdulilliah wrote:

You’re most welcome, have an amazing day! 😊

u too <3

IrinaVal66 · Answer

Wow really deep. I love it Bella!!!