Got bored so i desided to make a story, here i a preview.
It was the year 1000-1100 AD. It was dark, quiet, and peaceful. Some Vikings were asleep, while others were on Nightwatch duty. I remember it like it was yesterday, the day I fought for my kingdom and the day the Vikings kingdom would change. I was on night watch duty, and I was talking to my fellow Vikings when something caused a loud noise at the northern gate, a loud bang and the sound of soldiers and Vikings yelling. We were under attack. I rushed down the night post and down to where the sound had been heard. All I saw was destruction. Knights charging in our base, the sound of fire spitting, soldiers yelling, and swords, and axes clanging together. I rushed inside to warn the Commander. But he was gone, nowhere to be seen, so were the guards. I rushed back outside with my fists clenched tight.

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Got bored so i desided to make a story, here i a preview.
It was the year 1000-1100 AD. It was dark, quiet, and peaceful. Some Vikings were asleep, while others were on Nightwatch duty.  I remember it like it was yesterday, the day I fought for my kingdom and the day the Vikings kingdom would change.  I was on night watch duty, and I was talking to my fellow Vikings when something caused a loud noise at the northern gate, a loud bang and the sound of soldiers and Vikings yelling. We were under attack. I rushed down the night post and down to where the sound had been heard. All I saw was destruction. Knights charging in our base, the sound of fire spitting, soldiers yelling, and swords, and axes clanging together. I rushed inside to warn the Commander. But he was gone, nowhere to be seen, so were the guards. I rushed back outside with my fists clenched tight.

rose12345 · Answer

nice i like it

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@rose12345 wrote:

nice i like it

thanks.

Rylee88 · Answer

It's SO GOOD I CAN IMAGINE IT AS IF IT WERE REAL!!!

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@rylee88 wrote:

It's SO GOOD I CAN IMAGINE IT AS IF IT WERE REAL!!!

Thanks :D i feel connected when i read my own story x-x

Rylee88 · Answer

Good c: That's how you know it's AMAZING

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@rylee88 wrote:

Good c: That's how you know it's AMAZING

I 100% agree.

Alexis1415 · Answer

It's soooo goooddd paoooo
W Pao 😎 100% better than anything ive heard (besides rylee, yall are on same page)

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@alexis1415 wrote:

It's soooo goooddd paoooo W Pao 😎 100% better than anything ive heard (besides rylee, yall are on same page)

lol thanks, and i agree :D

Alexis1415 · Answer

@paofumiistrash wrote:

@alexis1415 wrote:

It's soooo goooddd paoooo W Pao 😎 100% better than anything ive heard (besides rylee, yall are on same page)

lol thanks, and i agree :D

ofc :D

madz2345 · Answer

SO FRICKEN GOOD PAO. 
I WANT TO KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN UNTIL I DIE♥💀

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@madz2345 wrote:

SO FRICKEN GOOD PAO. I WANT TO KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN UNTIL I DIE♥💀

Lol thanks, i just thought of it randomly.

Zeldris · Answer

It's amazing it left me speechless keep up the good work

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@zeldris wrote:

It's amazing it left me speechless keep up the good work

Thanks, and i will . :D

Alhamdulilliah · Answer

Pao this is wonderful! I wonder how it went when you went back outside. Good job, this is wonderful! Keep it up!

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@alhamdulilliah wrote:

Pao this is wonderful! I wonder how it went when you went back outside. Good job, this is wonderful! Keep it up!

Thank you so much, i worked hard on it :D

elizabeth21 · Answer

i love it

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@elizabeth21 wrote:

i love it

Thank you :D i appreciate the feedback.