Question

Since I haven't wrote a poem in awhile and had to do one for my eng/lit class here u go my little flowers

In a universe where no one could see
Would peace live
Like immortality?
Perhaps we wouldn’t judge
If we couldn’t see.
We could be together.
We could just breathe.

Perhaps the world would be dark,
Or it could blur before our eyes.
We could only see past one another
Into clear blue skies.

In a universe where no one could see
Nobody could judge.
Appearance would no longer be a battle
That through we must trudge.
Your scent would be your hair,
Your voice would be your skin.
Your presence would be your clothes,
And nobody would care,
You’d always be “in”.

Maybe in this world,
The sky would be the ground.
Fire would be water,
Sight would be sound.
Things would be different and vast,
But one thing remains true:
If we want this image to last,
That is up to me and you.

Answer 1

Dis iz perfect bb uwu

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Goooddd jobbbbb faithh, i love itttt ❤❤

You need to make sooo much more for us like :0000 omllll

Answer 4

Tyyy!!! Much love to both of you!! I'll try to do more in the future, I promise 😘

Answer 5

This is veryyy gooddd (: keep it uppp!!!

Answer 6

AMAZING

Answer 7

Tyyy!!!

Answer 8

nice

Answer 9

This is a really beautiful poem Astrid, I'm in love with it!!!!! Wonderful job, keep it up!!

Answer 10

TYYY ✨