Question

iv got this pome i want opinons on its about last year the last cupple of moths of school

Answer 1

Hurt me more than
you healed me
You loved me more than i loved me
I dont know how to love
I wish i knew how to love a boy like you
But i dont know how
I dont get the fuzzy feelings
I dont know how to feel when you hold my hand
I dont know how to or what to
I just dont love you
And i dont know why

I look at her and my everything stops
I lock eyes with that amazing girl and i stop breathing
She makes me go crazy in ways i didnt know i could go crazy
She's so soft and innocent
Warming and sweet
I wanna hold her hand

But i cant
Cuz your there to hold it
Hurts me more to see her hold some guys hand
The hurt of faking a smile acting happy for you
Why did i agree to this?
Why did i think i wanted this
I knew i wanted her
Never you

I look at you and see a friend
I look at her and get lost in her eyes
Im far away deep im my mind

Look theres another
Just at pretty just as sweet
A little dark a little soft where you dont see
I want them both at the same time
Sweet as candy
Pink and black
Blue and purple
Light and dark
I want them both
I just dont want you

I want a girl
Not a boy
I dont know why
And i dont care why
Its just me
I like them both
I just dont like boy
I like the girls at most
I want to know how to love
Just not you
Sorry not sorry boo-

Answer 2

@karissafrazier @lynkpopfan2007

Answer 3

<3333333

Answer 4

now join back

Answer 5

...
i need link

Answer 6

this is beutiful i totally love it *^*

Answer 7

man keep being you and writing your music, as an artist myself the best thing u can do is just write evrything down. pull up the old songs we write them play around with them. but the key to being a good artist is having fun while doing it if your fans see that your really doing it right.

Answer 8

see thats where your wrong every poem, every peice of art, every song is music. music don't have to be a song, its what u belive it is.

Answer 9

.... i roght this with the intentions of a pome lol i could put a track behind it and sing it if i wanted but iv never imagined it as a song till now lol

Answer 10

lol thats the thing don't think, just let thing fly the more u think about it the more you second guess. most poeple work best if u just go with that gut feeling. u can do anything u want don't let poeple tell u otherwise.

Answer 11

thxxxx

Answer 12

@jungkook69

Answer 13

@lazorwolf64

Answer 14

Wow that poem was really good and i mean amazing

Answer 15

probably better than the ones i wrote before

Answer 16

its cuteeeee~

Answer 17

i loved the poem it was really beutiful

Answer 18

Great! Keep up the great work!

Answer 19

I love it!!!! Really sad though, but I get it. Stay strong babes ✊🏼

Answer 20

good poem i love it :)

Answer 21

noice

Answer 22

fr and noice :]

Answer 23

Def would give u an A+

Answer 24

Great!