-Describing a feeling- -Loving someone- Push and pull me, I will always remain here with you. Mark me, bruise me, for I am a fool who's head over heels in love, my feelings are true. Don't you dare say it's time to part ways, just say that you want me. I'll gladly take that risk, because I truly felt my heart belonged to you, that we were meant to be. Your hands will be held, your lips will be warmed, your eyes would no longer weep, your smile will show, your pain will be shared, and your heart will be mine. I will make it all go away, I'll make you feel okay, I will make you feel fine. Your tears that you have cried will no longer be apparent for I will be the one to wipe them dry. I am yours for you are mine. We have nothing yet, not even a mere dime, we cannot rely on others but we can rely on time. I will be yours until you draw your last breath because I know you were different from everyone from all the rest, you saw me at my worst and always claimed I was still the best. My love, No one can hurt you, haven't a worry for I will fight them all. Even if I lose, even if I fall, I try my best, till the end, I'd stand tall amongst the rest. I cannot do anything knowing you won't be mine, I cannot eat, sleep, or go on. Your presence left an imprint on my brain, after all, you've been here for so long, You are my yellow, my sun on my brightest days. Hold me, and hold me close, let's not part ways. For I cannot even bare the thought of losing such a crucial part of my heart. Without you, I'd simply fall apart. If you want me to stay, I will. I won't move a muscle, I won't even budge. To put it simply mi amor, I love you so very much. (I enjoy writing of such emotions so constructive criticism is welcome! :]) much love, chris/bee
Very beautiful thats all i gotta say well done.
Interesting
Very lovely. hope you do more like this
I love it very much good work!
It’s greattt keep it up! (:
thats varry good keep up that great worg then be proud of it mk yw
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