I love you more than myself
You may be gone but your still with me. Dark shadows in the dark waiting for me. I hope you hear me as i try to communicate with you Grandma Please help me. Sore up god and be safe, At least you will be in a better place. RIP Grandma.This poem is for you my lovely Angel

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I love you more than myself
You may be gone but your still with me. Dark shadows in the dark waiting for me. I hope you hear me as i try to communicate with you Grandma Please help me.  Sore up god and be safe, At least you will be in a better place. RIP Grandma.This poem is for you my lovely Angel

ddog · Answer

I'm here for u bro I lost mine 2 years ago to cancer

YRNDurk · Answer

reminds me of my mom RIP MOMMA IK ur lookin down on me

AyooRello · Answer

@yrndurk wrote:

reminds me of my mom RIP MOMMA IK ur lookin down on me

lol she always is

YRNDurk · Answer

Srry bout ur loss

AyooRello · Answer

@ddog wrote:

I'm here for u bro I lost mine 2 years ago to cancer

RIP. Sorry for ur lost

AyooRello · Answer

@yrndurk wrote:

Srry bout ur loss

its ok bro

YRNDurk · Answer

keep ur head up

ddog · Answer

Ye fr

YRNDurk · Answer

srry 4 ur loss ddog

AyooRello · Answer

@yrndurk wrote:

keep ur head up

thank you my boy

AyooRello · Answer

@ddog wrote:

I'm here for u bro I lost mine 2 years ago to cancer

Sorry for your lost brother. I will always be here with u

ddog · Answer

Thanks bro

YRNDurk · Answer

yw ayo

Astro · Answer

This is strictly me regarding the actual writing not the topic. Just to clarify so it doesn't sound like I'm being rude. There are a couple obvious grammatical errors. Overall, the message is good but could use a couple things from a "writing" standpoint.

AyooRello · Answer

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@astro wrote:

This is strictly me regarding the actual writing not the topic. Just to clarify so it doesn't sound like I'm being rude. There are a couple obvious grammatical errors. Overall, the message is good but could use a couple things from a "writing" standpoint.

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